Andrew
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Post by Andrew on Jun 5, 2007 5:43:11 GMT -5
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mitch
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Post by mitch on Jun 5, 2007 5:47:53 GMT -5
Well, it's pretty good here. Jump to the ropes is alright, but dude, when Sabu bounces off the ropes, he goes hella high. Then he goes down to normal height the next one, wtf? So yeah, pic 6 was like, crap. Reaction was okay, table break was nice, but edit out the tape. Not bad timeout.
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Post by 9murphy6 on Jun 6, 2007 1:23:22 GMT -5
well for one they don't shoot up in the air after the spring lol unless they were some realy bouncy ropes lol but yer kool i liked it 9/10
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Post by ll ALASKA ll on Jun 6, 2007 1:44:43 GMT -5
Jump to the ropes was good but I just dont understand why people dont arch someones back when they are doing a moonsault type move. I just dont get it.
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Andrew
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Post by Andrew on Jun 6, 2007 5:36:36 GMT -5
well for one they don't shoot up in the air after the spring lol unless they were some realy bouncy ropes lol but yer kool i liked it 9/10 Yer itz cool aint it pitty no one on this whole forum likes you  |
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Post by S on Jun 6, 2007 10:32:32 GMT -5
Good try, but i feel that sabu is a bad choice, he is too stiff in the legs, and that isn't even an excuse why you didn't arch the bac.... i've see you do better, i've seen you do worse
7/10
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Post by SouthAmerican WF'er on Jun 6, 2007 13:10:35 GMT -5
That was indeed your best, and I can see some good poser traits in this pose. You got the flow good, that's an excellent improvement. The only flaw I can see is that Sabu mega bounces off the ropes, if he would have jumped it would have been perfect. The impact was great, and you even included a mid table break, it's great to see you're trying harder. There was some stiffness by sabu in the jump, so try to fix that. So yeah, keep posing, you will only keep getting better. Oh, and lol at the thread title |
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Andrew
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Post by Andrew on Jun 6, 2007 13:26:40 GMT -5
*Changes title* lol thanks sawf I just got a bit of space cleared beside my set up so i can have more for posing angles ect, Its actually nearly like yours  Thnx for replyz guys |
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Post by SouthAmerican WF'er on Jun 6, 2007 14:54:19 GMT -5
yeah, i was gonna say that. You should get a clear background, possibly against a wall like I do. Helps a lot.
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Post by blade on Jun 6, 2007 16:26:35 GMT -5
jose shut up, the title is a david bowie song. you will bow down to the chameleon of rock >  |
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Post by brm on Jun 6, 2007 16:36:36 GMT -5
Man who sold the World
I think this is decent. Much better than most of the stuff put out by new guys. I like that you added a fram for Sabu pulling on the ropes for momentum. It shows that you have an eye for detail. Pic 3 is good, but pic 4 is a bit exaggerated. He seems too high. Pic 6 is bad. Having Sabu not arch his back, and having him bounce SUPER high is just plain inaccurate. He should have hardly gained any air or hangtime off a move like this. I do like the table break, but the tape showing under it is unprofessional. The ending pose is very freakish, and unnecessary. Sabu would not do that, he would be acting hurt, not beating his chest like he was at a sacrifice. Good stuff.
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Post by pistonfan on Jun 6, 2007 18:36:49 GMT -5
if your gonna have a tablebreak dont sho the tape
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Post by SouthAmerican WF'er on Jun 6, 2007 23:38:37 GMT -5
jose shut up, the title is a david bowie song. you will bow down to the chameleon of rock > I was talking about the part that said "sawf owes me a reply" before he edited it. :-> |
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Post by blade on Jun 7, 2007 2:11:43 GMT -5
sorry sawf  |
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Neverfail Nao
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Post by Neverfail Nao on Jun 7, 2007 8:06:58 GMT -5
8, 9 and 10 were good pics. The last one woulda been good too, but Sabus pose kinda ruined it, it looks like he survived the fall without a scratch. 7.1/10
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