PPV Warm up.

ffs, practice using all the joints on the figure.

stfu murphy.

i came across as a dick in the last reply, i should of given a better one. you do have a lot of potential but you really need to get the positionings of the figures right before you do anything else. if you would have made shelton a little more 'less stiff' then this would of been a really good pose imo.

just keep at it but try and focus on positionings in your next pose.

I like this pose. I think it may be your best, but like your other good poses, they are too simple. You should definatly do a burning hammer for the PPV, or something that has at least two figures in the air at the same time. There is one big thing that makes this sequence horrible. Shelton's springboard. Pic 5 has to be the worst springboard pic I have ever seen. It's unrealistic beyond belief. It also shows that you are having a hard time with posing. I also think you should have switched Shelton's hands before doing the springboard, or at least try hard enough to put his right hand where it belongs near the ropes. I also dont like that you had Sabu in the same position throughout the pose, you should have at least moved his arms and legs throughout. Pics 7, 8, and 9 are pretty nice though, they flow cleanly and gently. Like sawf said, you did the table break too soon, Shelton isnt even touching Sabu yet. There is no impact in the landing at all. Bad reaction for shelton, he shouldnt have had such a big step.