Edge spears the former RAW GM!

I'm going to be honest with you, Keifer, I'm a fan. First off, the set-up picture is great. You can see everything going on, which is good. I kind of credit myself with wide-span angles more or less, but what you did here is fantastic. If I hadn't read the title, I would have know exactly what was going to happen. You did a great job. The running is a different story. I don't know of anyone who can pull this off. Running is hard to capture, especially with RA's... but I've never seen it really "legit" with DA's either. Your attempt seems cartoon-like, and the way Edge's leg is kicked back makes him look ridiculous. The spear shot is fine, I would have had Bischoff leaning inward a little more, or turning backwards, depending on your preference. Anyone who takes a bump like that generally turns around to see what's coming and to brace themselves, having him just stand there with his arms up isn't interesting for me. Next shot is glorious... maybe should have turned Bischoff's head towards Edge? I used to have that Eric and I know that mine was tough to spin around but he's looking up and away, kinf of stupid. In the next frame I would have Bischoff's arms on Edge's back/shoulders. That goes hand-in-hand with selling a spear and it sort of looks out of place here. I do the same thing though, so no worries. Love the impact, they almost look like they're whispering to each other to check if each one is ok. I'm a big fan of how you made 'Taker look at the action too.

Solid.

Maybe. Now leave a real reply or get out of here.


Woah, Noname. Thanks a lot man. I loved the tips, especially the one for pic 5. Thank you very much.


Some notes on this pose..

- This was actually my first pose in like 8 months, not the RKO.

- This was made for the last PPV that never happened, and I hated it, but after I uploaded the pics to my computer they looked decent, so I said why not?

- I need more replies.

Very nice pose for your first in awhile, I actually enjoyed the whole thing. The first picture is nice for the most part, though with a bit of tweaking it could have been perfect, edge rather then having both feet on the ground could raise a foot to look like he is putting some force into the rope, also I would have proffered taker on one knee but not a big deal. Picture two is perfect, though if i were to have one complaint it would be edges arm positions seem to be random, and kinda forgotten about if you went back and edited them a bit it would look ace. Other than Bischoffs position the fourth picture is near perfection, I love edges position. The contact shot also looks great, I would have just brought edges head up a tad to even him out but yeah looks great still. Mid air shot is meh, I would have just preferred you doing a nice mid air table break but this was fine as well. The reaction is plain but nice I like the added detail of Taker looking back at eric and edge, though I hate the sideways type camera angle. Yeah nice job Sawf, the whole thing worked well together and looked great, nice to see you back.

Ok so, good thing that PPV didnt happen, i woulda been killed, lol.

First i like how you set it up as to why bischoff is there, and is just not randomly placed, more edge like woulda been if you had him more in the corner to set up the spear. The run was great, much better than the runs i do in poses. Nice reaction from Eric as he see's edge comin, he's all "No, No" as Taker ducks. Great two shots of the spear, especially the mid air one. I dont like how edge just kinda lands on his knee's, you think that would hurt falling on your knees from that height, and taker is all "oh, crap!".

Great pose

yay boo we hate bish-something awsome love the reaction of the undertaker all though his hands have to be open lol but that was just amazing 9/10