Andrew
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Joined on: Aug 25, 2006 6:45:29 GMT -5
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Post by Andrew on Jun 16, 2007 12:01:18 GMT -5
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Post by S on Jun 16, 2007 18:41:07 GMT -5
Pic 1 + 2 – Hmm… ok it sets the picture up but I don’t find the distant shot or the use of HHH at all necessary, you should have just kept close.
Pic 3 + 4 – Well.. could be better, but could be worse, they do the job of showing Shelton approaching, yet still after four pictures, sabu’s legs haven’t moved but it could be worse.
Pic 5 + 6 – What the hell is going on ?!, in pic 5 I thought Shelton was going for a chicken wing, I mean whats is actually going on ?... picture six is better, more joint movement but still damn confusing.
Pic 7 + 8 – Right, I feel this is the turning point, the pose is starting to make atleast some sence with picture seven, but I think the angle is bad, if you did it with the camera more focused on sabu it would be better, also Shelton should be more crouched. Ahh, at picture eight I finally realise it is a burning hammer… while this is a good picture, the perspective and simplicity is good, the arm of Shelton near sabu’s head should be around his head and it shouldn’t have taken seven pictures for me to know what was going on.
Pic 9 + 10 – Damn, it would be soo much better for both pictures if it was closer and lighter, again sheltons arm is in the wrong place and in all honesty I feel pic 9 is unnecessary.
Pic 11 + 12 – What the… Shelton lets go of sabu’s head in picture eleven, but has a hold again in picture twelve ?!, I just feel that picture eleven is just generally … messy, its blurred, the positions are iffy and its dark. Right, picture twelve turns it around, its light, clear, the table and glass break is great and Benjamin has sabu’s head again however, it doesn’t look like a burning hammer anymore, it looks like the bogeyman slipped while doing a boogey-slam (kinda like an inverted snow-plow) and even though Benjamin had sabuu’s head again, it is still incorrect.
Pic 13 + the rest – Well, its back to being blurred, however the positions have improved a little, but I’m not too keen on the closeness of the shots
6/10 imo, yes it may seem harsh, but you’re a big boy and can take the critisizm
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Post by Sound888 on Jun 17, 2007 6:04:42 GMT -5
since you really felt the need to pm me and ask me for a reply, i'll say a few words about it. but dont ever pm me for anything again. first of all, you screwed up the mid air shots so badly. i have no idea waht you did between jumping and landing, but the thing you should have done is a reverse f-u or reverse death vally driver. i dont know what you did in pics 10, 11, and 12. that is not a burning hammer at all. the glass was a horrible idea. dont do try things that you know youre not going to be good at. you certainly arent good at breaking glass. the only tihng thats mildly good about this pose is that for once in your life you did a pose with more than one figure in the air.
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Post by pistonfan on Jun 17, 2007 21:28:35 GMT -5
i realy like this pose the positioning was awesome i love when it was brightend
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