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Post by Cass on Jun 17, 2007 12:05:38 GMT -5
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Neverfail Nao
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Post by Neverfail Nao on Jun 17, 2007 13:40:59 GMT -5
Awesome Cass. Like the way Van Dam lands on his stomach. 9/10
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Post by SouthAmerican WF'er on Jun 17, 2007 23:28:19 GMT -5
Well dude, youre seriously improving. Alright, first thing that bugs me is that RVD should be running, as to give it that momentum feeling. Him waking kinda makes the pose slow. I like the transition between pics 2 and 3, but I think in pic three RVD should be tilted a little to his right. Picture four is probably the best from the sequence, I really like it. You really need a pic between 4 and 5. That is like the most essential picture in hurricanranas, with RVD almost releasing matt, but not fully. I like the fact that RVD fell on his stomach, nice detail. Plus, the fact that the table didnt break adds to the realism. Some pretty nice reactions, but I'd have preferred if RVD would have fallen to the outside. Still a nice sequence. Another tip: if you want to make your poses much mores interesting, start playing with the angles. I think you're ready to incorporate some crazy angles in your poses. Even if they're not that good looking, start using them, they will make your pose a hundred times better. Oh, and glad you defeated the chinese food. Would have been easier with a lemon juice interferance, though.  |
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