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Post by SouthAmerican WF'er on Jun 18, 2007 16:18:13 GMT -5
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Post by ThrowinUpTheX on Jun 18, 2007 16:52:52 GMT -5
It's a well done pose with nice positoning of the wrestlers and a well thought idea. The moonsault was good, you took real details of how it is done and performed it well. Not to sound like a dimwit but was Daniels meant to fumble the moonsault as it looked lke that to me. Jeff's reaction before Daniels has hit is good and i think this always make a pose look better and much more realistic.
Good effort and a very well done pose.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2007 21:31:53 GMT -5
It's alright, I don't like it nearly as much as your last though. Killings placing Hardy on the table was a nice little added detail and was done well so good job on that. Everything up to the run onto the rope was done really well too, no flaws there. My biggest complaint is with picture nine, Daniels legs should be pushed back to make it look like he was jumping more, it would have also helped the flow of the ssp, but not bad how it is. The rest of the pose is nice, it has a good flow and some nice positioning on Daniels, I would have preferred a mid table break but whatever not a big deal. Pretty nice sequence you have here.
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Post by gtasan on Jun 19, 2007 10:43:33 GMT -5
I loved the flow of the star press. Killings was a bit stiff, but it was only the set up of it.  The reaction was great for all, especialy killings. The editing was flawless. Picture Seven was absolutly great. great job well done.  BTW why was daniels shin and foot switched around. |
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Post by brm on Jun 19, 2007 16:50:50 GMT -5
I like this pose. Some shots in here are like HOLY. It reminds me of a sequence I would do. I like that you made jeff appear visibly hurt in pic 1. Pic 4 is awesome. I love how you know how to pick the best angles. The bouncing off the ropes is represented so well here. Not too exaggerated like mine, and not too soft. I love how you have daniels in the next pic. The running is not my skating style. It is perfect. The next pic looks good, but I don't see how he could have jumped off the top of the chair. A bit jsh there. Pic 7 is really really good. I love how epic it looks, and the angle change is so good here. We see SAWF's epic blinds also. Pic 8 has to be my favorite. I love the angle change it rules. You are the king of great angles. I love how much momentum and force is being exerted. You can just feel it. I really love the lean also. Now things go down hill. I really like the next picture as a splash, but as an SSP, no. It looks like he is just floating, and not even remotely trying to turn over. I hate how slow he is moving, and how he looks like he is going to miss jeff, and land on his neck through the first table. I don't like how it feels like time is standing still and waiting for daniels to finish his rotations of the move. I do like the aftermath shots though, and how the tables broke. Killings has a nice reaction also.
Glad to see the posing.
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Post by pistonfan on Jun 19, 2007 20:16:16 GMT -5
yeah i liked the flow of the shooting star pres i also liked how it shows the force of ron the truth killings putting jeff hardy on the tablei also like how killings hands are on his head it looks perfect it has the like o craplook but the rest was ok i like it keep it up
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Post by cjd15 on Jun 20, 2007 4:28:54 GMT -5
very nice pose.
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Post by Sound888 on Jun 20, 2007 18:40:05 GMT -5
i tihnk it's about time that i replied to this. the first three pics of this was nice. it sets up for the actual ariel move. i dont like how other people just start from pic 4. it doesnt show any setup and it confuses people more about what he will do. i like how you had the setup pics so it tells people what exactly will happen. i dont know what you did, but pic two really stands out in the first part. maybe it's the positioning of hardy, but it just looks really nice. the bounce on the ropes is really nice, i love how you had danial's arm around the rope instead of just resting on it. that is the little bits of detail that i would miss. the running shot is great too, i like how you capture movement without actually lifting up a foot. i do think there should be a pic between 6 and 7 though, and idont like the angle of pic 7, it doesnt match with the rest of the pics. you should have done the 45 degree back angle, that would have been a nice transition between the balance, and the jump. i hate pic 9 though, it ruins for flow of a shooting star press, though it would be an awesome pic for a frog splash. it does not flow with the next pic at all. pic 9 should be a back flip already, not a standing shot pic. the other thing that ruins this shooting star is that the danials figure cant bend his back, or move his legs backwards. you can not do any type of shooting star with a figure that cant bend backwards. pic 11 is ok, but still the stiff back ruins it. pic 12 has to be the best pic out of this sequence. i love how you had danials land on the table, but his body is still in the air. that is just a great shot. it makes lots of sense too, because i hate how people do jumps, and they come up short, but the landing is perfect. i love how you botched the landing, very realistic.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 20, 2007 22:07:10 GMT -5
yo i thot that had super neat flow =]
very realistic
especially on pic 11..teh truth is like "OH NO! OMG!" with his hands on his head haha
but yea stellarr pose
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Post by bonzoman15 on Jun 21, 2007 9:59:20 GMT -5
this is a nice pose, i like how it flowed nice and how you had daniels botch the landing
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