my 1st. tna vs roh

godofwar12194
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my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 15, 2007 21:09:53 GMT -5

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Post by godofwar12194 on Jun 15, 2007 21:09:53 GMT -5

tna vs roh ppv
petey williams vs matt sydal
petey wins with canadian destroyer after he rolls through the aftershock
gauntlet
tna roh
sonjay dutt kevin steen
jay lethal v.s davey richards
alex shelley chris hero
senshi jimmy rave
kevin steen wins after a package driver on dutt
table match
team 3d vs roderick strong
strong gets a jacknife from ray off apron threw table falls count anywhere
abyss vs super dragon
highlights
abyss chokeslams dragon onto 2 chairs set up in ring. abyss on table outside ring, dragon gets ot tb and hits a flying senton threw table. dragon gives abyss a curb stomp onto the thumb tacks!!!!! on apron abyss tries to chokeslam dragon threw announce table but dragon counters into a supernatural driver through the table for the win.

stevecorinoisgod Guest	my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 15, 2007 21:12:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 15, 2007 21:12:40 GMT -5 Are you even using EWR? The writing is bad, the grammar is pretty crap, and no punctuation makes it even worse.

godofwar12194
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my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 15, 2007 21:16:10 GMT -5

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Post by godofwar12194 on Jun 15, 2007 21:16:10 GMT -5

6 man tag
aj styles matt cross
chris daniels vs jack evans
chris sabin teddy hart
after a 45 min match roh wins when cross,hart,evan hit a crossfire,hart attack, 630 in stereo
loser leaves wrestling
samoa joe vs kenta
joe wins after a muscle buster onto a chair
kurt angle vs bryan daneilson
kurt makes danielson tap to anklelock
cm punk comes out and gives angle the pepsi plunge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
to be continued

godofwar12194 Guest	my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 15, 2007 21:20:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by godofwar12194 on Jun 15, 2007 21:20:34 GMT -5 harsh

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my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 15, 2007 21:55:49 GMT -5

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Post by foshizzle on Jun 15, 2007 21:55:49 GMT -5

Hey man it is pretty bad. Let me give you some pointers!

Alex Shelley Vs Pettey Williams
This was a good back and fourth match that saw Pettey Williams pick up the win! EXpand!

Also check out diarys like WWE 2K7, the one Jonny Nitro does and lots of other for advise.

Use puctuation, check spelling etc.

I will read if you try and improve theese things!

Last Edit: Jun 15, 2007 21:56:11 GMT -5 by foshizzle

Fury Main Eventer Joined on: Jan 21, 2007 21:19:09 GMT -5 Posts: 4,257	my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 15, 2007 22:05:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Fury on Jun 15, 2007 22:05:06 GMT -5 seriously that was bad. Read other diaries to get an idea of things. I think we maybe should bring spotlight to give people an idea of good diaries, although there is a problem with people quitting, maybe make a hall of fame section or something.

stevecorinoisgod Guest	my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 15, 2007 22:27:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 15, 2007 22:27:54 GMT -5 Reply to another diary before the next update or this gets locked.

godofwar12194 Guest	my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 16, 2007 15:36:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by godofwar12194 on Jun 16, 2007 15:36:10 GMT -5 ok,thanks for the pointers

Overnight Sensation WF Legend Joined on: Jul 2, 2006 18:32:13 GMT -5 Posts: 5,041	my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 16, 2007 15:47:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Overnight Sensation on Jun 16, 2007 15:47:19 GMT -5 take the pointers and use them man.....from what I can actually decifer.....this is actually good....use the pointers and this is gonan be something
	@zack_BraxtonDW @thetylervolz

Chris Hammers WF Legend Joined on: Mar 19, 2006 20:55:42 GMT -5 Posts: 9,073	my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 16, 2007 16:02:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Chris Hammers on Jun 16, 2007 16:02:17 GMT -5 It's not readable at the moment. Use the Center/Bold/Underline tools to your advantage. A Backstory would of helped as well. I could write you one up, if you like cause I like the concept of this diary.

talibanbackpack Guest	my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 17, 2007 16:27:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by talibanbackpack on Jun 17, 2007 16:27:23 GMT -5 Crap.

godofwar12194 Guest	my 1st. tna vs roh Jun 17, 2007 19:39:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by godofwar12194 on Jun 17, 2007 19:39:53 GMT -5 ok, if you want

Post by godofwar12194 on Jun 15, 2007 21:09:53 GMT -5

Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 15, 2007 21:12:40 GMT -5

Post by godofwar12194 on Jun 15, 2007 21:16:10 GMT -5

Post by godofwar12194 on Jun 15, 2007 21:20:34 GMT -5

Post by foshizzle on Jun 15, 2007 21:55:49 GMT -5

Post by Fury on Jun 15, 2007 22:05:06 GMT -5

Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 15, 2007 22:27:54 GMT -5

Post by godofwar12194 on Jun 16, 2007 15:36:10 GMT -5

Post by Overnight Sensation on Jun 16, 2007 15:47:19 GMT -5

Post by Chris Hammers on Jun 16, 2007 16:02:17 GMT -5

Post by talibanbackpack on Jun 17, 2007 16:27:23 GMT -5

Post by godofwar12194 on Jun 17, 2007 19:39:53 GMT -5