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Post by (HxRxN)-Shawn Johnson <3 on Apr 16, 2008 11:40:37 GMT -5
This was going to be my PSM figure but I really didn't like it   |
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Post by Joe/Smurf on Apr 16, 2008 19:28:02 GMT -5
Sorry, man. I like the attire but the head doesn't fit right. Keep workin on the head.
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Joliet Jake
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Post by Joliet Jake on Apr 18, 2008 12:16:41 GMT -5
On the AJ: The head looks too blury. Also add a black shadow under the chine line to help blend the head to the neck. If you use a brush that is set at 0% hardness and knock the opacity down to about a 10-15% and put it in the layer below the head it would help alot.
On the logos on the shorts it looks liek you used the magic wand to get the white out of the inside which gives it a really spotty rough look, use the polygonal tool to cut the logo out. Towards the middle where the shorts meet the stomach you can see some red, delete that out.
The tones on the boots don't match in either color or in contrast to the rest of the figure. I think if you worked with higher resolution pictures with would help a lot as well.
On the Punk: The head is too blurry and too washed out. The coloration on the tights is too bright and spotty as well, don't rely on the hue/saturation gauge so much, more time than not it ends up looking bad. Try cutting out the pieces on the attire and putting them on a different layer and then do the colorization. its more precise and will give you a smoother look.
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Post by juicyg on Apr 22, 2008 0:02:37 GMT -5
punk ok but aj is sweet
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Post by brethitmanhart on Apr 22, 2008 11:07:37 GMT -5
Hey man. If your going to post around here please reply with constructive critism. No point in posting 5 word 'great fig 10/10 A****' type answers. A five year old could post that. It doesn't make you look any better having a higher post count. AJ - Head is ok. The tones seem to be matching but looks too blurry and not plastic enough. Try adding more highlights to the cheek, nose and forehead areas for a better finish. CM - Recolour is good but overstaurated. The head isn't the best and like AJ's is over blurry and not figure looking enough to work yet. Keep trying though and you will improve. When I first started PSing I was much worse than you, it just takes a bit of practice and a technique. Try not to use anyone else technique and just use your own. It makes things so much easier. |
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