Andrew
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Post by Andrew on Jun 16, 2008 14:30:31 GMT -5
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Post by P@ul on Jun 16, 2008 20:22:16 GMT -5
It's ok. I'm not a huge fan of the second photo, Styles is leaning too far back. The corkscrew is good. There is something funny about the 6th picture I'm just not sure what it is, hand position maybe. Shelton did little to react after the move aswell. He also stays in pretty much the same position throughout the move. Just a few small things, otherwise its good.
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Post by goalie on Jun 17, 2008 19:16:21 GMT -5
Pretty good.
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Post by b13stinga on Jun 17, 2008 20:03:25 GMT -5
nice poses i like the last pose when aj points to him 10/10
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Post by Sound888 on Jun 18, 2008 0:21:53 GMT -5
Okay, Timeout! I've been wanting to reply to one of your poses, but the other ones were too good. That's a very good thing, because if you ever read my other replies to other people's poses, they're usually negative, and full of tips and such... So now, I'm replying to this, and it probably means it has a few flaws, right?... Correct. Your past two poses were very good, and you should keep posing, even though the name "Timeout" screams out NOOB to the other posers. You are getting very good at posing. I'll promise you that if I win the "big title", I'll give you the first shot, but brm won the match at the PPV, so I'm going to ask Cass to give you the next title shot because he'll only put me vs brm again anyways. Anyways... onto the pose. I don't think I've ever given you a long reply before, but if I have, enjoy this anyways. All your poses show a lot of detail, specifically in the number of pics. It's not always good to have that many. If you do, make sure ALL the detailed pics are different as much as possible. If you have many pics in the beginning of your pose, and fewer pics for the rest, it will look like the first part of your pose is going in slow motion, and the other part is moving faster. It's always nice to have a set-up sequence before your pose. In this pose, you should've at least had Styles climb to the ropes, if not, jump. Pic 2 is a really bad pic. It's more of the angle than the pic. If you had pic 2 in the same angle as pic 1, it would've came out MUCH better. And I mean MUCH. Pic 3, you should never ever leave a part of a figure out of a pic. We all know that you used string, it's just that the picture looks so bad with a part of the figure cut off. Also, you don't need pic 3 in there, because pic 2 connects wtih pic 4 perfectly fine. Pic 4 is a nice pic, but it has horrible editing. You blurred very obvious spots, and you forgot the string between Style's knees and elbow. Editing is a very important part of posing. You had it good in all your other poses, maybe you were just really lazy in this one. Pic 5 is a great transition from pic 4, everything flows great and it is very smooth. Good job on that one. I really like the angle you have in pic 6, it's a nice pic. You should really have a mid table break. Table breaks nowadays don't look good anymore without a mid break. You did NOT need the last two pictures. The pose would've "sold" better if you had Styles still on the ground, and just end it there. That's what I always do with my poses. I never have them get up right after a spot, because it will look harmless. You want the pose to look as painful as possible if you're doing a big spot. Overall, it's a good pose, very good compared to the other posers nowadays. Your past poses are much better though, keep posing!
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-LMB-
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Post by -LMB- on Jun 18, 2008 11:20:51 GMT -5
Hey Timeout nice work on the spiral tap the mid air shot is spot on and love the use of the ring and barryers as legs for the table.
Keep it up 10/10
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Post by instant classic on Jun 18, 2008 18:24:26 GMT -5
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Andrew
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Post by Andrew on Jun 18, 2008 18:42:11 GMT -5
Okay, Timeout! I've been wanting to reply to one of your poses, but the other ones were too good. That's a very good thing, because if you ever read my other replies to other people's poses, they're usually negative, and full of tips and such... So now, I'm replying to this, and it probably means it has a few flaws, right?... Correct. Your past two poses were very good, and you should keep posing, even though the name "Timeout" screams out NOOB to the other posers. You are getting very good at posing. I'll promise you that if I win the "big title", I'll give you the first shot, but brm won the match at the PPV, so I'm going to ask Cass to give you the next title shot because he'll only put me vs brm again anyways. Anyways... onto the pose. I don't think I've ever given you a long reply before, but if I have, enjoy this anyways. All your poses show a lot of detail, specifically in the number of pics. It's not always good to have that many. If you do, make sure ALL the detailed pics are different as much as possible. If you have many pics in the beginning of your pose, and fewer pics for the rest, it will look like the first part of your pose is going in slow motion, and the other part is moving faster. It's always nice to have a set-up sequence before your pose. In this pose, you should've at least had Styles climb to the ropes, if not, jump. Pic 2 is a really bad pic. It's more of the angle than the pic. If you had pic 2 in the same angle as pic 1, it would've came out MUCH better. And I mean MUCH. Pic 3, you should never ever leave a part of a figure out of a pic. We all know that you used string, it's just that the picture looks so bad with a part of the figure cut off. Also, you don't need pic 3 in there, because pic 2 connects wtih pic 4 perfectly fine. Pic 4 is a nice pic, but it has horrible editing. You blurred very obvious spots, and you forgot the string between Style's knees and elbow. Editing is a very important part of posing. You had it good in all your other poses, maybe you were just really lazy in this one. Pic 5 is a great transition from pic 4, everything flows great and it is very smooth. Good job on that one. I really like the angle you have in pic 6, it's a nice pic. You should really have a mid table break. Table breaks nowadays don't look good anymore without a mid break. You did NOT need the last two pictures. The pose would've "sold" better if you had Styles still on the ground, and just end it there. That's what I always do with my poses. I never have them get up right after a spot, because it will look harmless. You want the pose to look as painful as possible if you're doing a big spot. Overall, it's a good pose, very good compared to the other posers nowadays. Your past poses are much better though, keep posing!  , Thank you , So much, So so very much. The first line made me go all fuzzy inside |
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haggard
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Joined on: May 6, 2006 3:33:43 GMT -5
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Post by haggard on Jun 19, 2008 3:52:48 GMT -5
Pic 2 to 3 did not work at all! Everything else was pretty nice. Pic 3 is my fav tho. and i dont really see the point in showing AJ get up at the end, a pic too many i think, good job though.
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