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Post by wspaman1313 on Jun 24, 2008 19:59:32 GMT -5
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Sims
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Post by Sims on Jun 24, 2008 22:03:16 GMT -5
Beautiful I like it because its a mid air shot maybe his arms and legs could be spread out a lil more?/but besides that I really like it.
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Post by brm on Jun 24, 2008 23:17:03 GMT -5
I really hope editing didn't take you an hour. The pose is good, but the position is kinda weird. You sort of have Jeff tilted a little bit to the side, like he isn't centered in his jump. Besides it being a pretty simple pose, it's decent. You should have really done a sequence, as this is just a simple one figure in the air one pic. You clearly seem to know how to pose, so you should do something a little more difficult.
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Post by pimpmaster5000 on Jun 25, 2008 1:11:08 GMT -5
i think it looks good ,only thing i find odd is the tilting as brm has pointed out .good idea to use the black background ,it helps to edit the string out because of the plain color.mr kenedy is ok just he almost needs his head looking at jeff other than that it looks great
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Post by b13stinga on Jun 25, 2008 12:22:48 GMT -5
looks good but u could put his legs down a little bit cause then it will look like he is then diving
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Post by *Xx:DAN:xX* on Jun 25, 2008 12:47:04 GMT -5
i like it but i think jeffs a lil to low to be in that position. he should me ready to land it already
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Post by -LMB- on Jun 26, 2008 9:41:25 GMT -5
not bad but i think jeff should be a little higher in that postion but it looks very cool well done
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Post by wspaman1313 on Jun 29, 2008 18:58:06 GMT -5
UPDATE/BUMP!!!!!
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Post by darksideofthemoon on Jun 29, 2008 20:49:32 GMT -5
The Swanton looks ok. The only thing is his legs are bent to far close to the head. I can not rate the last pose because I can not see it because it is so small.
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Post by wspaman1313 on Jun 30, 2008 21:57:39 GMT -5
The Swanton looks ok. The only thing is his legs are bent to far close to the head. I can not rate the last pose because I can not see it because it is so small. Fixed.  |
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Post by wspaman1313 on Jul 7, 2008 18:36:47 GMT -5
UPDATED Again!
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Post by goalie on Jul 8, 2008 1:24:25 GMT -5
You really need to work on your flow on your sequence, the positioning is alright, but the flow just isn't there.
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Post by *Xx:DAN:xX* on Jul 8, 2008 12:31:55 GMT -5
the figs in the new one are a little bit stiff you should work on that
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