Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Jul 29, 2008 18:21:56 GMT -5
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Post by thecolt on Jul 29, 2008 21:12:54 GMT -5
Finally. Will edit soon !
Mick cleans up well !
Wow, I blinked and the first match was over !
Some of the segments ran together a little bit.
HBK match was decient. Good to see Morrisson.
The more shows you do, the more they will improve.
Keep it up man, and if there's anything I can help with, let me know.
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Post by alex123ecw on Jul 29, 2008 23:01:25 GMT -5
:/ Ugh tbh.
Over look, Really stiff posses man, bad customs aswell, the only decent one is Jacobs. To short of matches, mixing different style figs together is another big no no. Really short show. A lot of room for improvement. Work on poses and customs.
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Jul 29, 2008 23:32:53 GMT -5
Well it wase kinda Ugh
Your customs were a littls sloppy but I'm glad that you kinda went with a ROH type theme because its really original.
I would have to say that the best match was definatly Danielson vs HBK.
The poses in that match were decent and I can see you building a storyline
Anyway i just wanted to support so .
You got a alot you can improve on but I'm sure you will make it work. Hope to see more of your work really soon
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Post by deskjet on Jul 29, 2008 23:56:06 GMT -5
Welp, I was pleased with the main event length because the other matches were pretty short. I'd say work on backstage stuff, transition between matches with something besides interviews. Work on the background of your arena and make the commentary more indepth. Not bad for a first show but lots of work needs to be done  , but there's plenty of people to help you with that ;D |
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Post by reyisgod on Jul 30, 2008 2:57:02 GMT -5
Hey, I am watching it currently. Will edit tomorrow.
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Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Jul 30, 2008 5:24:32 GMT -5
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Post by Mattie! on Jul 30, 2008 5:51:42 GMT -5
hey dude nice show i must admit the jacobs vs morishma and MCMG vs Hooliganz were a little short but you made up for it by producing the main event which was a reasonable length which i was proud of great show can't wait for the second.
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Post by Ramos on Jul 30, 2008 9:50:47 GMT -5
Mattie
Thanks for the feedback. Yeah The Morishima match was meant to be a squash and MCMG/Londrick was a recap. Thanks for the feedback.
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Jul 30, 2008 11:58:02 GMT -5
Hey man, I actully enjoyed it. Sure, the pics werent too good, but your poses were not horrible. Your customs are cool as well, and glad your using ROH guys, very cool imo. Keep it up, this fed will be big with it's unique characters, also unlike some I understand the squash matches as it did the same thing in my first fed. Bro, as a new fedder to another, we gotta stick together, anyway good job.
-NBW
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Post by bigtaker2 on Jul 30, 2008 13:50:59 GMT -5
You should have more pics in the matches next time.
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Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Jul 30, 2008 13:57:10 GMT -5
You should have more pics in the matches next time. What is the  ing point in just posting that For Sake? |
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Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Jul 30, 2008 14:01:06 GMT -5
Hey man, I actully enjoyed it. Sure, the pics werent too good, but your poses were not horrible. Your customs are cool as well, and glad your using ROH guys, very cool imo. Keep it up, this fed will be big with it's unique characters, also unlike some I understand the squash matches as it did the same thing in my first fed. Bro, as a new fedder to another, we gotta stick together, anyway good job. -NBW Thanks man. Glad to here you enjoyed it. I ed up with the pics but I will do better next time when I have a better set up tbh. I can admit the poses were pretty bad I will try to get them better. I like using ROH guys but as I said before it backs me into a corner as to who I can bring in if people think of my as "The Guy with the ROHesque fed." The unique characters thing. I am currently in the process of assesing the whole roster tbh and deciding who gets what gimmicks. And one of those gimmicks is to make Morishima seem unstopable. So as you can see the squash match did have a reason behind it. (I know you agreed with that but I felt like pointing it out anyway  ) I will reply to NBW in a bit man  |
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Post by Ramos on Jul 31, 2008 6:45:26 GMT -5
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Post by Villa on Jul 31, 2008 8:18:49 GMT -5
Great show man! The Micheals vs Danielson match was well set out. Great enjoyable match. I'd give it 9.5/10 The first match for me, didn't really work. As in half of the pictures didn't load I'd say work on your promos a little better. Watch each person do a promo or interview and get ideas from them. Another thing, Maybe get a better arena. Buy some A3 black or white card and set them up around there abit. |
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Jul 31, 2008 11:28:53 GMT -5
Been meaning to reply for a day now, sorrys =/ Ive seen some of your stuff and it way better than the first half of the show. I seen you said the first match was a squash, It was hard for me to believe. Now Im not real familiar with Morishima, so for me and anyone else who isnt familiar with him, a couple of punches and a backdrop driver really didnt do him justice, especially for a squash. Thats my opinion though. The tag match, I seen you said it was a recap. Again my opinion, a full match would have added to your show. I cant really reply to a recap, but this was one of those instances where figure choice made it hard for me to believe. Ive seen some pretty good customs from you. Just dont like mixing of figure types, again my opinion. The main event made the whole show. As expected from Danielson and Michaels =) Good job on this match, well put together. Not sure how I feel about Morrison getting involved. Danielson winning was a good choice for the time being. I know you can put on a good show and make some great matches. Aside from the main event, this was kinda lackluster. However, I cant wait to see what you do next. Thanks for posting this though. ~> After thinking about it, I may have mistaken you for someone else  |
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Post by Ramos on Jul 31, 2008 16:20:01 GMT -5
DukehGlad you liked HBK Danielson, Soz about the pictures thing. Yeah I ed up the promos :x I am currently remodelling the arena but I like my backdrop HCO:Brandon LeeYeah I think you got me confused. Glad you liked the main event man. Morishima is just to look dangerous building up to his Kobashi match. And the MCMG will have a proper match at my next show
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Post by jdash on Jul 31, 2008 18:30:59 GMT -5
Good first effort...the customs are okay, whatever works for ya
2 matches and the 1st one was short?! thats okay
Your poses while stiff will improve bend knees and craplike that it will work out for ya.....
Would have loved to see some backstage segments, dont worry though I think it was pretty solid for a first effort
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Post by Ramos on Jul 31, 2008 18:33:11 GMT -5
Good first effort...the customs are okay, whatever works for ya 2 matches and the 1st one was short?! thats okay Your poses while stiff will improve bend knees and **** like that it will work out for ya..... Would have loved to see some backstage segments, dont worry though I think it was pretty solid for a first effort Better customs on the way (Danielson repaint, Kevin Steen, El Generico, Chris Hero & Delirious .) This was a preview kind of thing Yeah I am trying to improve them. Segments will come in time man. |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Aug 1, 2008 15:37:49 GMT -5
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OK finally i have the time to reply. a lot of family issues have come up which is why it took me so long to reply, but i am here now and i am ready to reply.
OK man i am going to give a quick review of the show. i thought it was good, but the pictures were a bit too blurry. the match pics were blurry, but the backstage interview pics were soooooooo crystal clear. Wazup wit dat!? LOL I thought the matches were an OK length but the first one was way too short. the poses are OK, but you need to work on them. the Jacobs custom is great, but the other ones a a bit sloppy. like i said the matches were good and poses were decent. just work on those and they will get better. i usually watch shows more than once so if i catch something else i will edit the reply. sorry i couldn't go in depth, but great job. cant wait for the next show =)
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