Teh Joker
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Post by Teh Joker on Aug 1, 2008 21:24:49 GMT -5
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Aug 1, 2008 21:59:30 GMT -5
Theres quite a bit of work that it really needs, but if you want a particular reply then okee dokee...
WHAT I LIKED(one thing): The fact you tried...
WHAT I DIDN't LIKE(one thing): Poses...
FAVORITE MATCH/SEGMENT(IF NECESSARY): RVD interrupting CM Punks celebration... I'd love to see this feud.
RATE THE SHOW: (4-7)HEAT
Things you could use impovement on: Poses Commentary Picture size and quality - Resize pictures and stay away from frequent close ups.
Stick with it, take in all advice, and just have fun. Thanks for posting.
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Post by kc on Aug 1, 2008 21:59:31 GMT -5
First of all, I am not going to reply like that. Pretty stupid. I'll give you my thoughts like this:
Resizing your pics a bit would be nice, they are huge. The opening segment with Vince was lame, not a lot of detail. "Hey, I'm Vince, sit back and relax, welcome to FTW" kthxbi. Not a fan of the commentary also.
The opening tag title match was really short, the finish just came out of nowhere. Stiff/string-less poses are a bad thing, not a good thing.
The IC title match was also short, and probably the worst finish to a match I've seen in a pic fed in a long time. The only cool thing about this match is the Kane, that figure is bad ass. WTF, why did Kane just out of the blue take off his mask after winning the IC title!?
Wow, the U.S. title match was also pretty bad, two DQ finishes in a row. Ewww. Once again, the commentary needs more detail. LOL DUM EDDIE, IT'S CODY RHODES~! LOL. This fed is hilarious (Not in a good way)
Ok, It's main event time. I hope to gawd Hardy doesn't win. Pretty much no structure in this match, just an absolute brawl throughout the entire thing.
I'll be honest, I didn't enjoy this. The poses need work, also I would work on commentary. The match length needs to be longer. I don't have high hopes for this fed, and for the record, Full Throttle Wrestling is the most generic name ever. Yeah, hopefully your second show will be much better that this.
Just for ****s and giggles.
What I liked: To be honest, none of it other than the awesome Kane figure.
What I didn't Like: Pretty much, the entire show
Favorite match: I liked the MVP/Kane match, just because the finish was so awful. It had me in stitches laughing. and then when Kane just randomly unmasked himself, hahaha that was the cherry on top.
Rate the show: 2/10 [House Show]
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Post by bigtaker2 on Aug 1, 2008 22:28:07 GMT -5
What I like: You tried and it was pretty good. What I didn't like: That 2/4 matches ended with a DQ. Favorite Match: I don't know they were all pretty decent. 8/10
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Teh Joker
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Post by Teh Joker on Aug 1, 2008 22:29:44 GMT -5
okay guys thanks on the replys. this was my first show. i know the poses suck. and so does the commentating. theres a story behing Kane taking off his mask. ill resize the pics for episode 2. trust mei will improve. the stage was also crappy. i just winged it basically. Next Time it will be better. I promise.
EDIT- ill improve. i just need to get a hold of this whole pic-fedding thing. any tips on how to improve?
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Post by deskjet on Aug 1, 2008 22:36:49 GMT -5
Not a bad debut show. good pics, pretty good match ups. Commentary wasn't too bad but could use some improvements. Arena could use some work too. Really like how you did the kane transformation. I'd like to see more character development outside of what we get on tv ie Orton, Punk. Again I'm not a fan of the youtube stuff, just makes the show look bad and didnt really like the one page shows...but overall a decent debut with some minor adjustments. I'd say you're well on your way Keep up the good work!
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Teh Joker
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Post by Teh Joker on Aug 1, 2008 22:39:35 GMT -5
Not a bad debut show. good pics, pretty good match ups. Commentary wasn't too bad but could use some improvements. Arena could use some work too. Really like how you did the kane transformation. I'd like to see more character development outside of what we get on tv ie Orton, Punk. Again I'm not a fan of the youtube stuff, just makes the show look bad and didnt really like the one page shows...but overall a decent debut with some minor adjustments. I'd say you're well on your way Keep up the good work! Thank You deskjet.
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Aug 1, 2008 22:45:14 GMT -5
Yah Boi** FTW! Ok, Chris Beniot as commentater TOO MANY MEMORIES!! BOO!! Cryme Tyme vs Holiganz, Could it be!?! ...and it's over, hopefully theres more to the fued? DA BRAIN IS IN THE HIZZLE!! Cool. about the Brain, next is Kane and MVP ...I still want that Kane, but RA5 is good MVP cannot knock his ass down, haha Dude, Kane is a beast, NEW CHAMP! ...Unmask? Why I like him with mask...eh..W.e Punk vs Orton vs Edge vs Jeff! C'mon Orton! Please, no do not let Jeff Hardy win.... YES GTS MUTHAFUCER CM PUNK AS CHAMP! WOOO! ...RVD? Hardcore champ! I like that belt too Anyway I liked it bro, good job, commentating wasnt too bad, and the matches werent that bad either. Good Luck, and if you ever wanna do a joint show/fueding angle with NBW, hit me up, we got similar guys. Peace out -NBW
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Teh Joker
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Post by Teh Joker on Aug 1, 2008 22:52:30 GMT -5
Yah Boi** FTW! Ok, Chris Beniot as commentater TOO MANY MEMORIES!! BOO!! Cryme Tyme vs Holiganz, Could it be!?! ...and it's over, hopefully theres more to the fued? DA BRAIN IS IN THE HIZZLE!! Cool. about the Brain, next is Kane and MVP ...I still want that Kane, but RA5 is good MVP cannot knock his ass down, haha Dude, Kane is a beast, NEW CHAMP! ...Unmask? Why I like him with mask...eh..W.e Punk vs Orton vs Edge vs Jeff! C'mon Orton! Please, no do not let Jeff Hardy win.... YES GTS MUTHAFUCER CM PUNK AS CHAMP! WOOO! ...RVD? Hardcore champ! I like that belt too Anyway I liked it bro, good job, commentating wasnt too bad, and the matches werent that bad either. Good Luck, and if you ever wanna do a joint show/fueding angle with NBW, hit me up, we got similar guys. Peace out -NBW yeah we should totally do a joint-ppv
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Post by iyfwkidzc on Aug 1, 2008 22:58:12 GMT -5
PH- Hello Ladies and Gentlemen i an Paul Heyman. CB- and I'm Chris Benoit I almost stopped reading after that.
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Teh Joker
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Post by Teh Joker on Aug 1, 2008 23:00:36 GMT -5
PH- Hello Ladies and Gentlemen i an Paul Heyman. CB- and I'm Chris Benoit I almost stopped reading after that. lol those aren't the real commentators. well benoit isn't. so don't worry.
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Post by iyfwkidzc on Aug 1, 2008 23:03:23 GMT -5
Good.
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Post by thecolt on Aug 2, 2008 10:02:55 GMT -5
What I liked : The fact that it was longer than 2 matches.
What I didn't like : Pics are a little big, some blurry.
Favorite Part : Kane was cool. Rvd was cool too.
Heat 4-7
Keep trying man, with every show, improvement will come.
Good Job !
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Teh Joker
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Post by Teh Joker on Aug 2, 2008 11:57:27 GMT -5
Thanks Guys. I'm filming FTW Episode 2 today. so it will be up within the week.
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Post by mck on Aug 2, 2008 13:57:00 GMT -5
Some of the commentary had me laughing my ass off.
But uh, yeah. Lots of room to improve. KC pretty much summed up my thoughts. Just keep trying.
Lay off the DQs too.
mvp: o hai ref ref: wtf mvp: slam
eddie: o hai hurricane hurricane: wtf ref: DQ!
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geroge86
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Post by geroge86 on Aug 2, 2008 14:04:13 GMT -5
I can't see the pics because it says the photos have been moved or deleted
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Teh Joker
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Post by Teh Joker on Aug 2, 2008 14:14:13 GMT -5
I can't see the pics because it says the photos have been moved or deleted !!!! i just cleaned out my photobucket and i guess i deleted the pics and !. oh well im uploading FTW Episode 2. so you can watch that. sorry i will fix the pics when i have extra time. im an idiot
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Post by alex123ecw on Aug 2, 2008 15:57:03 GMT -5
Please resize pics next time too.
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Post by The Outsider on Aug 9, 2008 20:45:28 GMT -5
I can't really comment, as the pics are all gone. Without those, it kinda sucks...
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