easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Aug 13, 2008 1:48:47 GMT -5
First let me just say that, for over a month now I have poured my blood sweat and tears into this project, with writing storylines, doing commentary, taking photos, editing photos doing some part switches, buyiing customs (thanks Gatecitysinner  ) and etc, etc, etc, etc. I never truly appreciated you guys and the work you do. So thanks to all of the people on this board. A couple of things to note ~I USE ALL DA'S ~String poses are a lost art thats why you wont see to many in this episode but at the same time I hope I can improve on them ~I have studied countless matches of all of my roster and hope to give that quality match feel. ~My matches were all filmed at different times and thus the referee does not appear in the last two matches (sorry about that guys  ) So with out further adew I present to you the first Episode of World Wrestling Revolution's RoughHouse www.freewebs.com/ehunt1986/ |
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Post by Red Dragon on Aug 13, 2008 4:01:04 GMT -5
I enjoyed it, it was well done, I would have took the tag title match out and had thta next time, 3 title matchses seems a bit much, also with a ladder match I feel you have to build up to it not just stick it in there, the Lynn and Douglus customs are sick can't wait to see more (please say Corino?) Poses need a bit of work but so does every fed, sorry if I focused on the negative but thats what I do lol, It was good, can't wait for ep 2 good luck
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Post by deskjet on Aug 13, 2008 6:40:14 GMT -5
First of all I think it's really commendable of you to say thanks to the other pic fedders out there. It's always nice to see someone understand and appreciate what we do The opening match was really good. I liked the concept of the TAg team match. Douglas/Angle was really good too and it was cool to see thosee guys go at it. You gotta do like BEn Rothliesberger or Hines ward as a specail guest referee next time I tell ya though, DA's are really great figs..your poses were pretty realistic, and you'll get better with string useage. hEre's my only suggestion..and this is more my personal taste than anything else...tidy up the arena, meaning make a more defined backdrop and cover up the floor abit. NEXT button at the bottom of page. less side by side pics. OTher than that, a very good debut show and something that has lots of potential. You worked hard and it shows, hope ya stick with it for a while...lookin forward to more |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Aug 13, 2008 10:28:51 GMT -5
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OK man i am just going to give you a brief overview of what i thought of the show and some things you can improve on.
I thought this was a pretty good show and rather enjoyable to watch. I don't think I have ever seen an all DA fed which is new and exciting. the customs are good. gatecitysinner makes some great customs (he made my sting figure). Anyway the matches were a pretty good length and they were enjoyable with decent back and forth action. Your arena is pretty cool, but seeing parts of your room which were not parts of your arena was a bit of a turn off, but still a good arena. Umm... Lets see the customs were good, nice match length, cool arena... oh and It was fun to watch and thank you for posting it.
OK now for the things you could improve on. More string poses would be great and please... do not use your hand so much. i would understand if you used your hand for a couple of poses but almost every mid air pose was with your hand and that... isn't cool at all and it doesn't make for good poses. So invest in some string and practice string poses. The commentary was pretty good which i was pleased with. LOL at the Lebron and Carmelo comment. Umm what else can you improve on?... oh yeah you need to work on camera angles. some of the angles made what was going on in the picture hard to see. But overall good job.
This was a great show especially for your first. you did a good job and i would like to see more from you. just keep working and you will get better. good luck to you man =)
you have a bright future here if you continue to have fun with this. =)'
sincerely,
(=wwefan617=)
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Aug 13, 2008 11:03:56 GMT -5
Wow some people actually liked and enjoyed my show well time for some shout outs I guess. Red Dragon Thanks for the reply man, Well the reason I threw the tag match in there because I wanted to make it seem more like a PPV than a episode, I did'nt wanna just kinda do what everybody else does which is have the GM come out with belts and just start throwing matches up in the air, I always found that annoying and I wanted to make it seem that WWR HAS BEEN going on and that it just got a TV deal, Yeah you will def see alot more customs in my league, and speaking of the King of oldschool I might do a quick custom of him very soon (I have all the parts for him already so why not). Any way thanks for the reply and hope to see more of W3 soon also Deskjet Yeah I just had to give thanks to you guys, and what you do, I think picfedding is alive because of what you guys do. Thanks for the comments on the Lynn vs Morrison match and the Douglas vs Angle match, I hope they were of PPV quality. Yeah the Tag match was okay, but it was also the first match I filmed which is kinda a NO-NO as a first match but oh well. Good call on the hines ward or Big ben angle, I did'nt even think of that. Yeah Im looking into getting some sort of backdrop, although I kinda like seeing a little bit of the wooden floor my self. I also kinda like side by side pics because it allows you to not stop the sequence but thats just preference I guess. How do you do the Next thing any way? Yeah I own about 100 DA figures, Thanks for the reply, Hope Genext is up soon!!! WWEfan Yeah a couple of people have tried all DA feds but I guess they just never pan out. One of my big time inspirations is Wild Attitude Wrestling, even tough he only did a dark match (JBL vs Foley) it was still a great match Yeah in reality I am kinda a neat freak and seeing parts of the room were definatly not kosher. I actually have a custom Sting from gate also except its DA, You might see him in a tribute show but not on the roster because I feel he's almost kinda to big of a name. Yeah Im a sucker for using my hand and I actually do have string its just sometimes I not the most patient person so Oh and some of the camera angles were because I was using my hand so  which is kinda funny. Thanks for the reply and I hope to see another episode of AWF very soon |
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Post by takerfandan on Aug 13, 2008 11:20:46 GMT -5
Great to see some new fed's up and coming. <3
Some pointer's though for you;
Please put either the link to the next page at the bottom or get someone to make you a NEXT button because it's really annoying having to scroll to the top to switch pages. You did do it on a few not all, and ever though you did do it they opened in a new window which is like ughh but no biggy. ;[
Pic quality is okay, poses we're oright aswel. Commentry was abit too dull for me but whatever at least you got the show up, right? ;]
Some good thing's now are the custom's. There really awesome. Also it's great to see that you are mixing thing's around with the figure sizes. One thing I can't stand is to see an RA & a DA in the same ring. ;[ So yeah that's great that your using just DA's.
And the best thing of all is Douglas is champion. <333
Can't wait for some more. :]
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Dyamez
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Post by Dyamez on Aug 13, 2008 11:45:17 GMT -5
okay this fed has so much potential and i want to try to do some positive criticism.
I like the way you introduced how much you prepared for this fed, the reviews, the script, even the customs. Anybody who's that into a fed would really put his heart into it. I really admire that. I must say the card is also well balanced except for the 3 titles in one night but hey, it's your fed and if you think that will start feuds then by all means do it. My first show only had 1 match.
Now here we go with some areas for improvement. I'm a sucker for good lighting and pic quality. Consistent lighting and still camera would make any fed presentable. Easy on the eyes make the viewers stay. I first stayed on the pose board and they make it simple. Make your pictures tell the story. A well posed move will tell the difference between a clothesline from a rockbottom. This also applies to the flow of moves. There were some pics where it looked like a quick recap due to the pace of the pictures.
Make the most out of the string poses. you're right, string poses are rarely done here. Again choose the best angle and position of the figures.
Overall, i can't wait to see what you can do with this all DA fed. So much potential, so little time. hehe. Great work man!
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atm.
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Post by atm. on Aug 13, 2008 11:57:40 GMT -5
Easy dude, lets run this dog...
Starting off nice Franchise custom
Ok, very nice Jerry Lynn custom, and cool JBL as commentater!
Who made that Gate?
Morrison is always a beast
Dude, very nice back and forth action.
Hurricarana onto the floor
Moonsualt by Morrison holy shit!
He was kinda high but not bad
...woah a 360 something leg drop. Never seent that be4
Nice kick, woah a reversal by Lynn, big powerbomb
Moonlite drive? Made up move? Cool Cool it works
Sweet 1..2..3
Morrison new champ, godly!
DDP and AAE sengment was blah, but Sid is coming, pretty cool
Chairs, and Ladders everywhere!
Cody and Kenny, cool little tag team
RVD frogsplash threw the table, sweet
Ouch, Sabu getting his hard
No, Not them don't let them win!
ahhh, I hate the Hooliganz pfft..w/e
Douglas and Angle, nice nice
Again great back and fourth action
The Franchizer, its over mothafuka
No Kickout!
German
and now no Franchise back in it
Fisherman Suplex!
AHHH he wins!
Godly once again
Easy, it was a very good show. I like your wrestlers, and your commentary. You need better lighting and clearer pics tbh, but it was a very good start show and cannot wait for the second episode. I would have prefered the Hooliganz not winning, but eh cant get everything huh? Poses were not too bad, like I said clearer pics, a better backdrop so the string doesnt show would all help. But very good dude.
-NBW
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Post by alex123ecw on Aug 13, 2008 14:31:11 GMT -5
Alright I'll give a little review on this. First off, the poses were horrible, along with the angles, couldnt really tell waht was going on. The commentary helped a little but still. The arena wasnt very clean, I suggest a back drop or something all one color. This has alot of potential, work on your poses man.
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Ramos
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Post by Ramos on Aug 13, 2008 15:30:09 GMT -5
Lynn/Morrison was awesome glad that Morrison picked up the win. Nice backstage segment. Glad Hooliganz won the tag match. Nice to see you are building good feuds straight off the bat. Glad Douglas kept the belt  Loving the fed so far. |
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Aug 13, 2008 21:16:48 GMT -5
Say heynecro Thanks for the reply, Could someone please tell me HOW to do the next thing. Sorry you didn't like my commentery, I worked really hard on it. IM glad people are kinda digging the idea of someone having a all DA pic fed. And glad you like Douglas as champ Dyamez Thanks for the reply man, I love beatdown! Yeah I know the 3 title matches seam a bit aggresive, but I wamter to make a statement on the first show, dont worry the next show will be a little toned down. Thanks for the advice on the poses, I will try to work on string more in the future NBW I absolutely love your reply, Instead of kinda critiquing every little thing you treat pic fed kinda how I treat pic feds, Like a real show. Glad you thought my matches were awesome. Im suprised no one is feeling the DDP-EStrada-sid angle. Again Iwill work on more lighting and also try to get a tripod or something so that I wont have to hold the camera as much.. When is the next showing of NBW, I hope you keep the laptop its kinda unique and awesome. Oh and the Moonlight drive is the actual finisher for Morrison look it up on Youtube xFallx Thanks for the reply, sorry you did'nt like the poses or amy of my storylines.  . Oh well cant please everybody, any way Hope the next episode of MWF comes on soon Ramos Thanks for the reply, Im really excited that people enjoyed Lynn vs Morrison. Im glad someone likes my backstage segments and storylines. Hope to see ya come back |
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Post by GreatOneBNBPro on Aug 14, 2008 9:59:53 GMT -5
First i'd like to say, i love the customs!
Lynn vs Morrison - pretty good match. I loved the running powerbomb that got reversed. poor jerry lynn! MOONSAULT!!!! Great action shot, only thing is, i see some string =P but that's ok. Reverse suplex onto the guard rail! That had to hurt. Awesome 360 guiallatine. Morrison wins! woohoo
Tag match - Fast action...i love it. Hardy's with lots of early ariel maneuvers which is awesome. Sabu through the ladder! OUCH! RVD through the table!!! HOLY SHIT! HOLY SHIT! HOLY SHIT! Holligans win, nice ending....kinda hoping for hardys, but still a good match.
Kurt vs Duglas - A match i'd love to see now. Duglas in control early after a cheap low blow. BELLY TO BELLY OFF THE TOP ROPE! The Plunge!! 1-2-3!! Duglas wins!!
Very nice show overall. I didnt like that you could see a lot of string, but i can live with it. Action shots were great, DA's seem to work really well opposed to RA's.
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Aug 14, 2008 23:36:46 GMT -5
GreatOne-Thanks for the reply man I really appreciate the complements on my show. I love WFR so far I hope the PPV turns out great
Come on people lets get some more replies,
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Post by carly1988 on Aug 15, 2008 18:45:56 GMT -5
*Mark out for Shane Douglas*
*Mark out for Mystery guy* If its who I think it is
WHAT I LIKED(one thing): The battle of Pittsburgh...Great match that flowed smoothly between Angle and Douglas
WHAT I DIDN't LIKE(one thing): You can see string and your hand in some of the pics. Nothing too big. Just stuff a lil editing can fix.
FAVORITE MATCH/SEGMENT(IF NECESSARY):Outside of the main event I loved the tag team match. Fast paced with a ton of action.
RATE THE SHOW: I'll give it a solid 8-9.....Great job with poses, pics and commentary...Cant wait to see where some of these storylines go
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Post by thecolt on Aug 16, 2008 10:33:21 GMT -5
I'll reply soon !
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