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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2008 6:39:08 GMT -5
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Neverfail Nao
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dunnolol
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Post by Neverfail Nao on Sept 25, 2008 9:15:58 GMT -5
I really like the whole "comic"-idea, but the text is way too small, it's hard to read it, and the layout is messy, and the pics are sometimes stretched and sometimes squeezed, me no like. #1 Match Too short in my opinion, but the tag teams made it up. They're really something that would probably exist if WWE owned TNA. Edge landed the wrong way from the FU. YESSSS! Rear Naked on Cena  Promos I've said it before, and I'll say it again, I love your Sabers-stable. #2 Match Finally someone with the Sharkboy "Austin"-gimmick. Bah Gawd, Baracus is here? Tomko with Sharkboy? Huh...might work. Kaufman's Tomko's manager? You've got a lot of new guys. Sharkboy isn't even in the match? Why'd he come out there in the first place? To jibba-jabba? Wow, cool ending, but did Mr. T & Kwik get DQ'd? A nice move to bring the NOD back. Overall, a solid show, but the comic layout...well...sucked. Please don't ruin your great show with it. With the cartoon layout 6/10 Without the cartoon layout 9/10 |
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Post by bigtaker2 on Sept 25, 2008 15:40:52 GMT -5
Old format was better 6/10.
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Dyamez
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Post by Dyamez on Sept 25, 2008 17:12:16 GMT -5
Welcome back. I love the poses on this show. It was way better than the previous shows.
Clear pics. I know your inspiration for the comic book layout and you know your my boy so im all support. Its yer first time to do it so id understand. I got sum cool comic book creator program at home, i can give ya a copy if you want. No criticism that hasn't been said yet. The pics were kinda stretched and the commentary was all over the place. Personally I like the old format but I know you can pull this off after some episodes.
Soild quick show man.
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Post by greatandpowerfuloz on Sept 25, 2008 19:28:35 GMT -5
poses are really awsome, the format is unique
-Great Job
-{oz}
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samsson
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from the southside
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Post by samsson on Sept 26, 2008 0:51:02 GMT -5
PLEASE GO BACK TO OLD FORMAT !!!! the show was good, first match alittle quick, hard to read due to spacing,if you fix that it would help alot.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Sept 26, 2008 5:16:33 GMT -5
OZ samsson bigtaker2 Those are not good replies IMO. You guys might be new to pic fedding or maybe you are going to edit later idk. And if you are going to edit (which I suggest) you should put it in your post that you will edit soon. Just some tips becuz people work really hard on these shows. dont take offence just giving some helpful advice REPLY
OK now to the reply. Sorry I didnt get a chance to edit yesterday but I am here now and ready to give you a reply. I'll give you some bullet points and then go into the overall reply
Some things I didnt like were...
The new format
The stretched out pics
Some things I loved:
The storylines
The original characters
The arena
The poses
Overall
I thought this was a very good show and I have been waiting a long time to see some more WFCW Slam. And I have to say you did not disappoint. You did a good job despite the bumpiness of the new format. I would suggest going back to the old one, but it is your fed and it is your decision. But even if you go back to the old format I would suggest making your pics a bit smaller because big pics can make people's eyes hurt. Like I said I would really like if you went back to the old format. That was the only thing I really did not like. I liked the way you picked up right on the storylines so it was like you were never gone. Good job man. Everything was great. We will all be waiting for your next show =) [/i] |
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Post by deskjet on Sept 26, 2008 18:15:39 GMT -5
WOW, what a cool and innovative way to present. a tad confusing but very entertaining.
Not sure I'm feelin the whole NOD thing. Some funny stuff withthe commentary. Overall good but I think the format, although creative took something away from the show. but, always enjoy your work.
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Revelation O'Deeves
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The Man Called Sting...
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Post by Revelation O'Deeves on Sept 27, 2008 15:20:12 GMT -5
I like the old format alot better.... Really got excited when i read WFCW, but was dissapointed with the comic book format sorry man 2/5
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tirva
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wTw pic fedder
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Post by tirva on Oct 2, 2008 22:42:21 GMT -5
Those storylines are really good...I find the comic layout to be sweet because it's unique and some guys talked about it years ago. The only thing is that it's kinda confusing with all the arrows sometimes.
overall, solid show. 8/10
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Post by Deleted on Oct 15, 2008 8:41:28 GMT -5
Thanks Guys!
I think I'll start shooting my next show & it will be something kinda like the old & a little from the new format.
You'll see, it will be another new format, kinda.....
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GreatOneBNBPro
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POSSIBLE BAD TRADER Not allowed to trade here.
35 refs
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Post by GreatOneBNBPro on Oct 15, 2008 10:20:53 GMT -5
I actually really liked this.....the layout was unique and gave it something special. The poses were great....i really need to get some DA figs for my fed...the extra points of articulation make it so you can work wonders with the poses.
over-all i'd go with a 9/10
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Post by greenjack1992 on Oct 21, 2008 15:03:59 GMT -5
PLEASE go back to the old format, it ruinned the show.
I love WFCW and I love Slam, but it's very dissapointing to see how grammatically incorrect almost every single piece of dialogue is. For instance, for some reason you said 'that' after 'like' every time; so it read something bizzare like 'it looks like that jim is going to speak now' and it was so annoying. It's always been what lets WFCW down on both shows, the spelling and grammar, it makes the show annoying to read. Don't take this as a criticism...well do...but a constructive one. It needs to make sense.
The poses were great as always but the pictures were stretched or squwashed in this strange new format.
I didn't enjoy this edition I'm afraid. The spelling and grammar was worse in this than any of your other installments of Slam and the new format was poor.
4/10.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2009 10:26:57 GMT -5
Very Good ! I Like !
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