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Yeah, fire away bros.

Sounds like a good time.

Sounds about right. You don't realize until you actually check the word count that you put that much work into one. I've checked my most recent matches right after I posted Butterfly Effect, and they usually average around 10,000 to 12,000 words. It doesn't seem like a lot when you're in the process because most of us write in sections.

This game is pretty strange sometimes.

It's still a sexuh set of results, even with a missing match. I think with the holiday it threw us off our games, but we will rebound in fine form.

So post show survey time!

1. Favorite match
2. Favorite moment
3. Biggest shock
4. Show MVP

1. I really dug the Penny/Trace bout. Sheer physicality. Both parties look good and Trace gets a well earned win.

2. Even though I wrote it, the last half of the World Title match was my favorite sequence I've probably ever written. Dean and Drakz make magic in the ring.

3. Again, hate to stroke my ego, but I thought the double turn and double title change was something that no one expected and I'm glad we did it.

4. All contributors. It really does take a team effort to put these shows together.

Additional thoughts.

All the matches I thought were pretty tightly contested, so good job showing guys.

That promo was awesome!

I might have the shortest World Title reign in fed history. Congrats Drakz on becoming a 3 Time World Champion.

With my World Title reign (no matter how short it is), I have become the 14th Triple Crown winner in WFWF history. It's an honor to be in the class with those guys,and still kind of surreal that 12 years have passed since I was last in this kind of position. Was beginning to think it'd never happen again. Now we have a new journey ahead of us, regaining the title.

Great job guys.

Provided I don't have another grade book snafu that needs fixed, it'll be in your box later today, fully coded.

Gotta agree with the fellas here bro that you paced this thing very well. Everything had an overarching purpose toward the story you're telling. What I like is the monologues from Tyme's perspective and Lucas' s perspective. The clashing of philosophy, varying degrees of confidence. Where you have an extended history with Tyme in WFWF, it's good to get that background, especially since he has been a big part of what you're doing so far.

What I worry about with you is Tyme becoming the focus of the rp instead of Lucas. You got really close to making it more about Tyme, and he's the secondary character now. I don't know if it's just the comfort level you have with Tyme after writing the character for so long, but be careful man. I think with your experience you should be able to reign it in and find a good balance for both.

Solid.

I agree with Drakz and Trace that the biggest issue here is that this is rushed. I thought you had a great flow starting, then it just stopped. Chase has been gone and presumably dead for quite a while (pretty interesting storyline), but brother you got to let it breathe.

Here's a thought that may help you. I notice you are having a lot of self doubt about your abilities and the type of work you're putting out. Play with that emotion. I've always noted things feel more authentic when there are elements of truth to them and I think that could be the shot in the arm you need to take your stuff to the next level. You have the tools and a good character to work with. Slow it down a bit and you'll be fine.

Merry Christmas you beautiful people!

Swimmingly. I think you'll like how I build the match.