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Post by Revvie® on May 29, 2011 6:07:45 GMT -5
A Game of Thrones by George R. R. Martin
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Post by Revvie® on May 27, 2011 7:16:56 GMT -5
As I have told you in messages, it has been a great honor to finally get our big match and I put my full effort into it and as usual your rp was flawless to me. I think you covered what you needed and with the finesse that I always see you bring to your monologue. I am sure others could find complaints in no real use of scenery but sometimes rps are about whats there and not what you didnt place in them. In this case I think the vocals of Alex ring clear and seem authentic in everyway....in that sense I think this rp owned. haha oh and....can I get some of that purple stuff?
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Post by Revvie® on May 25, 2011 18:11:57 GMT -5
"generic compliment relating nothing to the content of the rp"
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Post by Revvie® on May 25, 2011 17:23:25 GMT -5
Roleplay is up....so yea...
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Post by Revvie® on May 25, 2011 17:22:14 GMT -5
Achelous VS. Hercules A Re-imagining By Revvie
Alexelous stood before the fair maiden, he took to his bow, each gentle movement was fluid in nature, a stream to each extremity. The God of the River stood at an even frame, but carried it with wit and finesse so that no mortal would doubt his true stature. This was all quite the opposite to his opposition. Jadoales stood at least eight foot and was built like no man or creature that had ever been born to this world. Though Jadoales was a beast of a man, in comparison to a God, he was still just as he was. These two had histories of their own, and each their own reasons but neither dared to take to far an eye off the lovely lady Championa.
She was a Princess and one of the truest left in the land. Championa’s eyes were laced in gold ribbons and her gait was hugged by a tight sundress that caressed her with every step. A grin perked across her lips, and both the God, and the Mortal felt weak to her glance.
The God Alexelous and the man Jadoales stood across a field of green. Out of arrogance, the man Jadoales, began to pander to himself and to that of crowd that had gathered. He spoke of his quests throughout the land and all that had stood in his way. Jadoales doted greatly upon himself and that of the Gods and Goddess that were his kin. As Jadoales graciously finished his speech, one could spot a smirk in the River God’s eye.
Alexelous would not be bested in vocals by a mortal and behold his lips started to sing themselves. “Dear Man, Dear Boy, do you not grasp the vice. Dear Boy, Dear Man, let my words ring with spice. Mortal, you are by Divine mistake, a bastard that even your father forsake. Be by death or life, you will be but that of shame.” Each syllable was riddled with strings and horns of variety. Jadoales flexed tight and drew in a breath of annoyance before exhaling his irritation.
“You may have bested me by ear but by sheer might you shall fall short. I shall be silent, and my hands shall be my words.” In his growl you could find no doubt, and the God stood on a edge at the decree, but doubted every bit of it without hesitation.
The two went cold, silence overwhelmed the crowd. Then a rapturous sound emerged from the gatherers at the sight of the two locked in grips. God and man stood eye to eye, both in restraint of the other, each paced his strength as not exert to much in the first moments. Many hours passed as the men wrestled generously for the crowd and for that of there fair prize. On one of the many breaks that had taken place, both men felt the wear of the fight and eyed one another with flames dancing about in their gaze. Alexelous broke the silence with a joyous tune of spite for all ears, “A Heave and a Huff and the man is wearing thin, A Heave and a Huff and still this God is looking prim.” The crowd drew in deep breathes of laughter at Jadoales expense. This the River God took great pride in and even mocked gestures and movements of Jadoales.
Jadoales, in haste, moved toward Alexelous and threw him upon the ground. The impact shook the trees and caused orange and yellow to rain down upon the two combatants. Dust spun about before settling, and within a small crater, were both Alexelous and Jadoales. The man had pinned the God to the ground, the Gods jaw was full with the earth but his eyes still contained the remnant of his smirk. Then, in what seemed to graze only upon a second, the God had put on a coat of scales and slithered his way out of the hold and away from Jadoales. Jadoales took a moment of shelter within the crowd and then lunged forward with new life. “I laugh at the God who hides behind the venom of a serpent, I was among child hood when I learned the hunt of the snake and now I shall show you that which I taught.”
Alexelous hissed with amusement and slithered about erratically to throw off his assailant. Before much longer, Jadoales had cornered the God again and pinned him effortless to the ground. Though in arrogance, Jadoales again showed naivety in not taking the God seriously. As before, this proved to be riddled with flaws and in that moment Alexelous released his green jacket and grew to an enormous size. Horns topped his head and meat topped his bones. The God had become that of a bull and his sights were upon the man that had dared try to earn a name by defeating Alexelous. The bull blew forth fire from his nostrils and drew forth enough air to produce a growl. “Let this be it, let it be done and when I find you fallen dead, let us all cheer for the God who had won.” He chortled with excitement before kicking a few clumps of grass into the air. Upon the third kick, the bull rushed Jadoales, and all looked lost in the hero’s eyes. Then, as impact was imminent, Jadoales played his hand. The Gods horns were locked firm into the man’s giant hands, each one of the horns wrapped in completion. The God snorted in anger and Jadoales gave way to a hearty guffaw. Then in a sense of superiority Jadoales ripped one of the horns from the Gods head, sending him into a bloody roar. As he receded back to his river he spoke out one last time. “Bested me here, But not without regret, bested me here, but another life you will fret.” And the God vanished beneath the waters.
Jadoales, with horn in hand, moved towards the beautiful Championa. She rested her lips on his cheek and with the next movement she removed the horn from his hand. She stuffed it with glory and praise and filled it to the brim. She called it Cornucopia. Because I have had complaints about my rpings looking like bs and most people feeling like I am not really saying anything in them and its all just me making stuff up, I have come up with a semi-solution when I feel thats the road I am taking. Visit Revvie's Easy Reader Companion for a rundown of what you may have missed. wfigs.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=wfwfrpovcrv&action=display&thread=216380&page=1
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Post by Revvie® on May 25, 2011 17:16:26 GMT -5
Revvie’s Easy Reader Roleplay CompanionRoleplay Title: Achelous VS. Hercules: A Re-imagining Match: Alex Sean vs. Jason Jadoa 1. Possible Vocabulary Confusiona. Pander: Indulging in somebody’s wishes or questionable tastes. b. Doted: To be especially fond of somebody or something. c. Chortled: A noisy gleeful laugh. d. Guffaw: To laugh loudly and raucously. Roleplay Easy Read Summary The most important aspect of the roleplay is to read it on two levels. First enjoy it for its words and the physical images and representations that you find in it. I’m not the best writer but I do try to give everyone something fun to read while also storing my own personal ideas and images beneath the surface. This seems to be where I run into my biggest complaints and I have hopes that this might help. When reading over it for that which I buried both in my word play and such, one must first have some small knowledge of Jadoa and Alex past. For new people this is a bit more difficult but when I am more so writing for two owners who have been around for a time, this is why I focus on the nuances. So here it is… Alex and Shadows feud is not all that is important but their past. With that in mind I decided to use a mythological storied I had enjoyed in the past to make it easier to follow along. The idea was that at first both Shadow and Alex had come to their current situation with their own pasts and own wants and in turn found each other. Also by noting that I always use God with a capital G one can see that I am depicting Alex as mightier and above me when my time had started. This can be seen due to that only the Judeo-Christian God is capitalized and most polytheistic groupings are lower case. When Shadow originally started to draw fame Alex came back, with an already established repertoire. In the story Shadow made note allowed of all his achievements and those he had ranked with. This is in turn how my Shadow had reacted when Alex began to throw his weight around. Though Alex was quite arrogant, Shadow was not ready nor able to truly compete at that level. The fight plays out variable instances and generalizations of how the over all feud and history took place. The most important is the end of the fight. This is an interpretation of Shadow coming to a final fruition within himself. He had doubts and he knew that Alex was his elder and it would be a fight that would be long fought without fists and in turn he was able to overcome his adversity within him and give himself new strength. The fame, the award, and the honor could be his now and be deserved. Direct Verse Explanation“Though Jadoales was a beast of a man, in comparison to a God, he was still just as he was.” This line gives credence to the idea of a man vs. God, which is to say that when it started Shadow was still a novice where as Alex had already reached a status of veteran.“She was a Princess and one of the truest left in the land. Championa’s eyes were laced in gold ribbons and her gait was hugged by a tight sundress that caressed her with every step. A grin perked across her lips, and both the God, and the Mortal felt weak to her glance.” This one should be obvious, this is a reference to the WFWF title and how most competitors, who have a chance at it, feel weak to its power and honor. Championa is just a human representation of the title.“He spoke of his quests throughout the land and all that had stood in his way. Jadoales doted greatly upon himself and that of the Gods and Goddess that were his kin.” This was noted in the summary, just implying the original naïve status when Shadow and Alex first met.“On one of the many breaks that had taken place, both men felt the wear of the fight and eyed one another with flames dancing about in their gaze. Alexelous broke the silence with a joyous tune of spite for all ears, “A Heave and a Huff and the man is wearing thin, A Heave and a Huff and still this God is looking prim.” The crowd drew in deep breathes of laughter at Jadoales expense.” This was where you can see that both men are coming to a head and still Shadow is seen as the weaker. This was more of an tribute to the fact that most do not have faith in Shadow winning this match.“The man had pinned the God to the ground, the Gods jaw was full with the earth but his eyes still contained the remnant of his smirk. Then, in what seemed to graze only upon a second, the God had put on a coat of scales and slithered his way out of the hold and away from Jadoales.” The form of the snake in the story was much different then how I wish it to actually be interpreted. The original mythological text does not denote the snake as trickery but that’s exactly how I want it to be. Snake is synonymous in literature with evil and underhanded tactic. This is to show the skill that Alex has over Shadow due to the sheer time of experience he has had in comparison.“Though in arrogance, Jadoales again showed naivety in not taking the God seriously. As before, this proved to be riddled with flaws and in that moment Alexelous released his green jacket and grew to an enormous size. Horns topped his head and meat topped his bones. The God had become that of a bull and his sights were upon the man that had dared try to earn a name by defeating Alexelous. The bull blew forth fire from his nostrils and drew forth enough air to produce a growl. “Let this be it, let it be done and when I find you fallen dead, let us all cheer for the God who had won.” He chortled with excitement before kicking a few clumps of grass into the air.” This is to show Alex over all annoyance with the resilience of Shadow. Despite defeat and humiliation the man will not stop at defeating the God. Shadow has little faith in himself but wont stop until he is gone. This was an assumption that this would draw anger out of Alex which is what the bull represents. “Then in a sense of superiority Jadoales ripped one of the horns from the Gods head, sending him into a bloody roar. As he receded back to his river he spoke out one last time. “Bested me here, But not without regret, bested me here, but another life you will fret.” And the God vanished beneath the waters.” This of course is a representation of Shadow overcoming his doubts and finding himself in all the chaos. He finally retains the ability to defeat his opponent.“Jadoales, with horn in hand, moved towards the beautiful Championa. She rested her lips on his cheek and with the next movement she removed the horn from his hand. She stuffed it with glory and praise and filled it to the brim. She called it Cornucopia.” Again, this is only a representation of the prize to be won and the honor that is bestowed with a chance at it.For anyone interested in the actual mythological tale and its meaning click herewww.online-mythology.com/achelous_Hercules
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Post by Revvie® on May 24, 2011 14:03:24 GMT -5
Short but alright. I likd how you put over the rage your character was put in by thinking of Malakai, that would have been a good aspect to expand upon a little, which would have added a lot more to this RP. Though still pretty solid. Actually...pretty much what he said.
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Post by Revvie® on May 24, 2011 14:02:36 GMT -5
your becoming like the next gen zmaster...its solid but I dont see it being much more then that.
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Post by Revvie® on May 24, 2011 13:59:29 GMT -5
finally finished my rp....have a few edits I must do before going any further but I am happy with the product so far...
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Post by Revvie® on May 24, 2011 12:46:47 GMT -5
It's a huge topic because people can paint Christians as all believing in this crap and then mock them. actually agree with you I loathe how people are doing the whole "im not anti-christian" thing in the thread, all the while posing statements that are clear about how they feel and there true toleration of something they probably understand very little of. And Hawkings beliefs are like many others, that this all doesnt matter and in the end it just ends. if that is what you wish to believe then fullfill what you wish but do not assume him any greater or any less great than any other great man in all of history..he is still a man and still knows about as much as we do about life and death...the only difference is he is amazing at math... For me, I find it foolish to think human conciousness was merely an evolutionary trait...but that is not to say little of anyones beliefs see I said that I didnt like and made it a joke to believe it and tried to maintain that I wasnt taking a jab at anyone....
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Post by Revvie® on May 22, 2011 17:24:41 GMT -5
No one has faith in my rping anymore On a serious note....I wrote my rp...hated it and scrapped it and am starting over haha....gah I sometimes loathe the necessity to write for the reader....
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Post by Revvie® on May 21, 2011 9:44:10 GMT -5
I don't buy that very much. There has to be more to it. You can't believe God just decided to not care all a sudden. actually it was insinuated in the season 5 finale that chuck was God......
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Post by Revvie® on May 20, 2011 18:27:31 GMT -5
I'm seriously super excited that H.P. Lovecraft and possibly the Mythos may be introduced next season...with the preview for tonight showing it and the casting of HP lovecraft as a character in it....this may reinstill my faith in this show again...I was sketchy this season but if this is where they are going....well they had me at hello then haha
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Post by Revvie® on May 20, 2011 14:10:33 GMT -5
.....I saw this when I woke from my nap.....even though I havent watch wrestling in years this still kind of hit me...just being a kid and watching him...sometimes I tend to forget they were supermen and eventually they will die....still takes a minute for me to wrap my head around it.
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Post by Revvie® on May 20, 2011 11:13:54 GMT -5
Thoughts over the last season or over the previews for tonight?
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Post by Revvie® on May 18, 2011 11:17:30 GMT -5
The Main Event! WFWF Heavyweight Championship EBR (C) vs. DGX Title Shot vs. Career! Dog Collar Match Alex Sean vs. Jason Jadoa International Championship Thunder (C) vs. ?? ... with special guest referee Yukio Blaze ‘I Respect You’ Match Phillip Schneider vs. Johnny Knight Singles Competition Ace Bennett vs. Johnny Michaels National Championship Chris Jackal vs. AJ King vs. Hutton Brown Singles Competition Trace Demon vs. Calvin Lee Hardcore Match Cameron Stone vs. Justin Tyme Opening Contest! Singles Competition Shawn Malakai vs. ZMaster Dark Match Singles Competition Oscar Conrad Davidson vs. David Handlecatch Make your Predictions and please give your reasoning why you think so and so would win.
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Post by Revvie® on May 14, 2011 12:14:05 GMT -5
We need to do a contest or something here soon for fun. Not saying anything fancy, just something fun thats wfwf related.
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Post by Revvie® on May 13, 2011 10:25:14 GMT -5
I'm with Rev. Let's impeach Horror! Since he technically doesnt mod this board...not much to be done.
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Post by Revvie® on May 12, 2011 21:13:19 GMT -5
Anybody else find the situation of using the internet to tell someone on the internet to tell other people of the situation....who are also on the internet...kind of funny? maybe its just me He didn't tell me by internet. He sent me a text message. ......so are you two dating or something....im confused? and since his phone seems to be a 3g or whatever due to him being on here on it at all points in time....my point is still valid
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Post by Revvie® on May 12, 2011 12:33:00 GMT -5
Horror wanted me to let everybody know that results will be up tomorrow. As of right now he's in the ER in really bad pain. Anybody else find the situation of using the internet to tell someone on the internet to tell other people of the situation....who are also on the internet...kind of funny? maybe its just me
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