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Post by jbarqu88 on Apr 19, 2011 12:01:35 GMT -5
The show opens with a recap of William Gunn advancing in the Championship Hunt.Chase Stevens makes his down the ramp and into the ring. He says that he is tired of waiting and that he wants his match now.
Savage makes his way onto the ramp and introduces Stevens’ opponent, Afa Jr.Chase Stevens vs. Afa Jr. Afa dominates Chase at the beginning until Stevens throws the referee into Afa, taking both men out. Stevens continues to control Afa, working on his left leg. Stevens goes to the top turnbuckle but Junior Fatu comes out and distracts Stevens. Afa capitalizes off of the distraction and throws Stevens from the turnbuckle. Stevens makes it to his feet and gets caught with a super kick for the three.
Winner: Afa Jr. (13:07) |
After the match Afa celebrates with Fatu on the ramp while Stevens throws a tantrum in the ring.**Commercial Break**We return and Tony Schiavone announces the main event to be Monty Brown versus Kenny Dykstra in a Championship Hunt match.We go to the interview area where David Penzer is standing by with Raul. Raul says that the only reason Paul London won last week was because of the steel chair. He continues on to say that next week, he will get his revenge.
Paul London walks in on the interview and says that he could beat Raul even without the chair. The two men begin to brawl and security breaks it up.**Commercial Break**We return and we see Brent Albright enter the ring. He says that he is putting up $500 of his own money if anyone can last 5 minutes in the ring with him. Albright spots a fan and brings him in the ring. He asks if the fan is ready and the man says, yes. 5-Minute Challenge Brent Albright vs. Fan Albright slaps the fan in the face as soon as the match starts. Albright throws the fan around the ring a bit before locking in the Armbar and the fan quickly taps out.
Winner: Brent Albright (4:08) |
**Commercial Break**We return and we see Dykstra and Brown make their way to the ring.Kenny Dykstra vs. Monty Brown Brown uses his power to dominate most of the match. Dykstra starts to make a comeback with a couple of Dropkicks but it’s too late. Brown whips Dykstra into the corner which sets him up for the Pounce and this one his over.
Winner: Monty Brown (12:39) |
Tony Schiavone hypes the Championship Hunt and London/Raul II for next week and thanks us for watching.
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Post by Rule 30 on Apr 19, 2011 19:40:53 GMT -5
Afa Jr. winning was fine I guess. Who exactly is Raul now? Anway, nice to see you actually building a feud with him and Paul London. It could be decent, I suppose. I like the 5-Minute Challenge idea. It's actually a pretty neat concept. I have something a long those lines coming in my diary, but back to this. The match went on far too long imo. You did need to waste that much time on Brent slapping a fan around the ring. Brent should have beat him in less time. Like two minutes max. You could have fit in another match between the interview and a shortened 5-Minute Challenge. The main event should have been more back and forth if it went on for 12 minutes. Brown winning was good though. Overall I'm impressed since this is your first diary, and not only are you doing a fantasy company, but you have a decent layout too.
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Post by Hi, I'm John on Apr 19, 2011 21:07:56 GMT -5
Would've prefered Chase Stevens to pick up the win, but with Fatu's interference it makes sense. Maybe bring in Andy Douglas? would help the tag division. Still confused on who Raul is and why Paul London is waisting his time feuding with him, when he should be main eventing imo. Agreed with Penguin, no fan match should be 5 minutes long, too much of a drag. Monty Brown winning is good, but Dykstra winning would've been fine too. Another decent show, still love the layout.
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Post by Jord on Apr 20, 2011 6:19:37 GMT -5
I like how you've kept things realistic by not bringing in Andy Douglas since he is retired and so most people wouldn't have bothered bringing Stevens in as a singers star since everyone just seems to use him as 1/2 of The Naturals in their diary. Not really surprised to see Afa, Jr. get the win. Have no idea who Raul is. Like the 5 Minute Challenge. Don't think the fan would have lasted nearly 5 minutes, though. Interested to see where you go with the challenge. Dykstra/Brown is a fine main event. Brown winning was no surprise.
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Post by jbarqu88 on Apr 21, 2011 12:45:28 GMT -5
VCW has contacted Jay Lethal, Paul Burchill, Kevin Thorn, Jimmy Jacobs, & Austin Aries about possibly coming in.
The VCW has continued on with their search for a new commentator. They have held several open tryouts with the favorite being OVW's Gilbert Corsey. They have also contacted former wrestler Sonny Siaki about possibly taking the job.
The second edition of VCW drew in .5 million fans. Still lower than what the company was expecting.
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Post by Rule 30 on Apr 21, 2011 12:55:03 GMT -5
Jay Lethal, Paul Burchill, Kevin Thorn, Jimmy Jacobs, & Austin Aries would be great additions to the show. I'm glad you haven't singed any mega stars yet.
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Post by duan on Apr 21, 2011 14:05:16 GMT -5
I retract my first statement about this diary. I didn't really give it a chance to get off the ground. You seem to have a basic understanding of a sim and your layout is great for a novice. Like Penguin said, I'm glad you haven't brought any REAL big stars yet and I like how you have indy rejects carrying the company. Keep it up man, I feel this will get even better with time.
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Post by jbarqu88 on Apr 23, 2011 17:43:48 GMT -5
Here is the list of confirmed matches for the next episode of VCW:
Brent Albright's 5-Minute Challenge
Paul London vs. Raul
Championship Hunt Match: "The Dogg" Jesse James vs. Big Vito
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Post by Chris Hammers on Apr 24, 2011 4:50:48 GMT -5
The layout isn't too great, but that could be improved quite easily. A fan of the roster, was always a big fan of Brent Albright and he seems to be being used well here. Once the shows have a more nice on the eyes layout, and the diary has a few in game months under its belt, I'm sure it could be great.
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Post by jbarqu88 on Apr 26, 2011 9:25:41 GMT -5
The show opens with a video recapping Raul and Paul London’s feud.
We then go to the arena where Raul and Paul London make their entrances.Raul vs. Paul London Raul starts off the match working on the right leg of London. London starts to make a comeback but the injured leg came into play, allowing Raul to get the advantage. Raul set London on the top turnbuckle for a Superplex. London pushes him off and connects with the Shooting Star Press for the win!
Winner: Paul London (13:47) |
London celebrates as we head to commercial.**Commercial Break**We see Randy Savage in his office as Chase Stevens enters. Stevens says that Savage is only putting him against guys twice his size. Stevens says that he wants revenge on Afa and Fatu. Savage says that if Stevens can find a partner then he’s got a tag match next week. Stevens says that he knows just the guy.Brent Albright makes his way into the ring. He says that he is issuing a challenge to anyone. He says that he will put up $500 of his own money if anyone can last 5 minutes with him. He says that he doesn’t want a wrestler from the back, he wants one of the fans here tonight. Albright spots a fan and brings him into the ring. Albright asks him if he’s ready and the fan says yes.5-Minute Challenge Brent Albright vs. Fan The match starts with Albright using his power to throw the fan around. Albright continues to toy with him. Albright hits him with a German Suplex that almost breaks the guy’s neck. Albright locks in the Armbar and the man quickly taps out.
Winner: Brent Albright (1:13) |
Albright celebrates as he taunts the fan laying helplessly in the ring. Tony Schiavone hypes the main event, announcing that it will be “The Dogg” Jesse James versus Big Vito.**Commercial Break**David Penzer is standing by with Big Vito and asks him his thoughts about tonight’s main event. Vito says that tonight, James doesn’t stand a chance. He says that after tonight, James is going to be sleeping with the fishes.Jesse James makes his way to the ring followed by Big Vito’s entrance.Jesse James vs. Big Vito James takes control of the match early which causes Vito to roll out of the ring in frustration. Vito starts to take control but James battles back. James does his signature, Shake, Rattle, & Roll to the delight of the fans. Vito starts to gain control but James catches him with a Small Package for the three.
Winner: “The Dogg” Jesse James (13:42) |
Vito is visibly upset as James celebrates with the crowd.**Commercial Break**We return and Chase Stevens gets into the ring. He calls out Afa and Fatu. Both men come to the ring and Stevens says that he has found a tag team partner and would like to introduce him. Just then, Shad Gaspard slides into the ring and attacks Fatu from behind. Stevens starts to brawl with Afa and the show comes to a close with all 4 men brawling.
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Post by jbarqu88 on Apr 27, 2011 16:04:02 GMT -5
The 3rd edition of VCW drew in .4 million fans which is needless to say disappointing for the company.
While we can't confirm any details, it appears as though VCW has indeed signed Paul Burchill to a contract.
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Post by Rule 30 on Apr 27, 2011 19:52:56 GMT -5
Good to London go over, much better choice. Who the is Raul anyway? Interesting enough segment with Stevens and Savage. The Fan Challenge was better booked this week, good job on that. Lackluster rest of the show, tbh. Jesse James vs. Big Vito just doesn't interest me. Raul versus London might have been better as the main event, considering it has a back story. The last segment should have not gone on last. That just doesn't seem like a good ending to the show. Shad Gaspard is a random choice, it's okay, I guess. Decent show.
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Post by Hi, I'm John on Apr 28, 2011 16:28:34 GMT -5
I don't like London opening, especially against a guy that nobody even knows, London should be main eventing! . Another Albright open challenge, hopefully it leads to a big name debuting, would be awesome. Jesse James is a much bigger name than Vito so him winning makes sense.. Shad Gaspard is completely random though, I don't think he is that big of an addition. Seemed kinda' like a throw-away show, but it was enjoyable for the most part.
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Post by shiftyeyes on Apr 29, 2011 9:20:53 GMT -5
Admittedly not been following this, mainly because it seems like your standard WWE rejects hired by a TV Station for wrassling diary. Let's see if you can prove me wrong. First thing I notice is how the logo is absolutely huge, and not that good, I suggest you do some work on that. At the minute, it doesn't look as good as it could. Straight away, the first thing I'm noticing is complete mis-use of a guy like Paul London. Complete mis-booking. You shouldn't be trying to use him to get over a no-name talent, he should be a main draw. Think about it, you're starting up your company, and you've got a guy like London at your disposal. Use him better, think, who isn't going to stop for a minute when channel surfing if they see a guy doing a shooting star press? Anyway, moving on to the actual match, it's good that London went over, but almost 14 minutes for a tv match? Does not happen in today's world. Glad you had London go over, please use him better from now on. As well, format wise, I don't understand why you're using purple font, should be red, match the logo. Randy Savage would be a HUGE draw. You do realise that he hasn't been on TV in a long time, and you using him as a commissioner? Again, bad use of characters man. Chase Stevens on his own, dunno if he'd be any use, but I hope you surprise us by not using his partner in the Naturals and instead use someone else. I like the idea of Albright holding a $500 challenge. If you did that every week, and moved the show location around, it'd sell tickets and it'd draw viewers. Good booking here! Glad to see Albright go over, build this up! Tony Schiavone? I'm not sure if he's even part of the business anymore! I would've used someone less known, because it just feels like you're paying a salary for Schiavone when he isn't really needed. Remember, in this you're thinking through the mind of the Versus Network, what's good for business, what'll do well in the ratings, what'll sell tickets. Vito using the phrase sleeping with the fishes in his promo was good, whether it was an intentional reference to the Mafia or not I don't know, haha, but I found it cool. Road Dogg at the top of the card I'm not so sure about, never felt he was much good away from X-Pac or Billy Gunn. Somewhat surprised to see Dogg go over, but the finish makes me think we'll see another match between the two. I'm quite surprised that you've gone with Shad, thought he was in the acting game now? Either way, it's a good move, especially if you use him as Cryme Tyme Shad, that'd get some people watching I'm sure as they were a popular duo. Should be interesting to see where you go with this next week. This diary has a lot of potential, but you're handling it the wrong way at the moment, take a step back and think about you're booking for a bit man, and which characters you are using in which roles. Your writing is solid, just the booking letting you down at the momento.
As well, Burchill doesn't wrestle anymore, he's a fireman.
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Post by jbarqu88 on Apr 29, 2011 9:25:01 GMT -5
Admittedly not been following this, mainly because it seems like your standard WWE rejects hired by a TV Station for wrassling diary. Let's see if you can prove me wrong. First thing I notice is how the logo is absolutely huge, and not that good, I suggest you do some work on that. At the minute, it doesn't look as good as it could. Straight away, the first thing I'm noticing is complete mis-use of a guy like Paul London. Complete mis-booking. You shouldn't be trying to use him to get over a no-name talent, he should be a main draw. Think about it, you're starting up your company, and you've got a guy like London at your disposal. Use him better, think, who isn't going to stop for a minute when channel surfing if they see a guy doing a shooting star press? Anyway, moving on to the actual match, it's good that London went over, but almost 14 minutes for a tv match? Does not happen in today's world. Glad you had London go over, please use him better from now on. As well, format wise, I don't understand why you're using purple font, should be red, match the logo. Randy Savage would be a HUGE draw. You do realise that he hasn't been on TV in a long time, and you using him as a commissioner? Again, bad use of characters man. Chase Stevens on his own, dunno if he'd be any use, but I hope you surprise us by not using his partner in the Naturals and instead use someone else. I like the idea of Albright holding a $500 challenge. If you did that every week, and moved the show location around, it'd sell tickets and it'd draw viewers. Good booking here! Glad to see Albright go over, build this up! Tony Schiavone? I'm not sure if he's even part of the business anymore! I would've used someone less known, because it just feels like you're paying a salary for Schiavone when he isn't really needed. Remember, in this you're thinking through the mind of the Versus Network, what's good for business, what'll do well in the ratings, what'll sell tickets. Vito using the phrase sleeping with the fishes in his promo was good, whether it was an intentional reference to the Mafia or not I don't know, haha, but I found it cool. Road Dogg at the top of the card I'm not so sure about, never felt he was much good away from X-Pac or Billy Gunn. Somewhat surprised to see Dogg go over, but the finish makes me think we'll see another match between the two. I'm quite surprised that you've gone with Shad, thought he was in the acting game now? Either way, it's a good move, especially if you use him as Cryme Tyme Shad, that'd get some people watching I'm sure as they were a popular duo. Should be interesting to see where you go with this next week. This diary has a lot of potential, but you're handling it the wrong way at the moment, take a step back and think about you're booking for a bit man, and which characters you are using in which roles. Your writing is solid, just the booking letting you down at the momento. As well, Burchill doesn't wrestle anymore, he's a fireman. Thank you for your comments. It's much appreciated. This is my first diary and I accept all comments on what I need to work on. Thanks. And as for Burchill, in a recent interview, he said he would come back if the scheduling was right.
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Post by shiftyeyes on Apr 29, 2011 9:29:03 GMT -5
Admittedly not been following this, mainly because it seems like your standard WWE rejects hired by a TV Station for wrassling diary. Let's see if you can prove me wrong. First thing I notice is how the logo is absolutely huge, and not that good, I suggest you do some work on that. At the minute, it doesn't look as good as it could. Straight away, the first thing I'm noticing is complete mis-use of a guy like Paul London. Complete mis-booking. You shouldn't be trying to use him to get over a no-name talent, he should be a main draw. Think about it, you're starting up your company, and you've got a guy like London at your disposal. Use him better, think, who isn't going to stop for a minute when channel surfing if they see a guy doing a shooting star press? Anyway, moving on to the actual match, it's good that London went over, but almost 14 minutes for a tv match? Does not happen in today's world. Glad you had London go over, please use him better from now on. As well, format wise, I don't understand why you're using purple font, should be red, match the logo. Randy Savage would be a HUGE draw. You do realise that he hasn't been on TV in a long time, and you using him as a commissioner? Again, bad use of characters man. Chase Stevens on his own, dunno if he'd be any use, but I hope you surprise us by not using his partner in the Naturals and instead use someone else. I like the idea of Albright holding a $500 challenge. If you did that every week, and moved the show location around, it'd sell tickets and it'd draw viewers. Good booking here! Glad to see Albright go over, build this up! Tony Schiavone? I'm not sure if he's even part of the business anymore! I would've used someone less known, because it just feels like you're paying a salary for Schiavone when he isn't really needed. Remember, in this you're thinking through the mind of the Versus Network, what's good for business, what'll do well in the ratings, what'll sell tickets. Vito using the phrase sleeping with the fishes in his promo was good, whether it was an intentional reference to the Mafia or not I don't know, haha, but I found it cool. Road Dogg at the top of the card I'm not so sure about, never felt he was much good away from X-Pac or Billy Gunn. Somewhat surprised to see Dogg go over, but the finish makes me think we'll see another match between the two. I'm quite surprised that you've gone with Shad, thought he was in the acting game now? Either way, it's a good move, especially if you use him as Cryme Tyme Shad, that'd get some people watching I'm sure as they were a popular duo. Should be interesting to see where you go with this next week. This diary has a lot of potential, but you're handling it the wrong way at the moment, take a step back and think about you're booking for a bit man, and which characters you are using in which roles. Your writing is solid, just the booking letting you down at the momento. As well, Burchill doesn't wrestle anymore, he's a fireman. Thank you for your comments. It's much appreciated. This is my first diary and I accept all comments on what I need to work on. Thanks. And as for Burchill, in a recent interview, he said he would come back if the scheduling was right. Glad to hear that you have the right attitude towards this! I'm not being mean, although I may sound that way, I'm just trying to help you by saying what I see!
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Post by Ace Bennett on Apr 29, 2011 14:45:08 GMT -5
I like what you are trying to do, and it's very similar to what I did in one of my first diaries. The layout is okay, at least you know what you are doing, but it could use some work. I like your roster, and I really don't mind this being unrealistic. I hope to see you push Monty Brown well, as he is one of my favorites who never really got a chance to shine to his full potential anywhere else. You need to be careful though with who you book in main event matches, because a match like Billy Gunn vs. Trevor Murdoch isn't really going to appeal to much of anyone anymore. I agree that Paul London is wasting his time feuding with whoever this Raul guy is, and should be focused more on fighting for the championship. Other than that, this is a diary that has some potential. Just don't sign too many people at the same time. Good luck
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Post by Ramos on Apr 30, 2011 15:00:34 GMT -5
Unsure as to who Raul is but the match was nice and I'm glad London picked up the win Brent Albright challenge is awesome, I'm glad he is being used in this sim Not a huge fan of the main event as I don't particularly like either of the guys in it but the booking Jesse James to win was good.
Good show, the booking is working so far, keep it up
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Post by jbarqu88 on May 2, 2011 9:17:53 GMT -5
Here are the confirmed matches for this week's VCW:
Big Vito vs. Jimmy Snuka Jr.
Championship Hunt Qualifier Brian Christopher vs. Paul London
Shad Gaspard & Chase Stevens vs. Afa Jr. & Junior Fatu
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Post by legendkiller8 on May 2, 2011 19:37:03 GMT -5
-London over that Raul guy was the better way to go, considering Raul is unknown. But stlil I hope to learn mor on Raul. -I like this whole thing with Albright's challenge. Him winning was the better way to go. I see someone big coming to the business and beating him. -Big Vito is that guy who wore a dress right? Well the right man won here tonight. -Solid show; alot of improvement here.
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