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Post by jbarqu88 on May 3, 2011 10:59:52 GMT -5
The show opens with a video recapping the feud between Afa & Fatu versus Chase Stevens.
Tony Schiavone starts hyping the main event tag match and the final bout in the Championship Hunt.
David Penzer is in the interview area with Brian Christopher. Penzer asks Brian if he thinks he can win tonight in The Hunt. Brian says that without a doubt, he will be walking out of here the winner.
We return to the arena as Big Vito makes his entrance followed by Jimmy Snuka Jr. Big Vito vs. Jimmy Snuka Jr. Vito starts the match with a slap to Snuka’s face. Snuka retaliates with a slap of his own. The two brawl back-and-fourth for a while until Vito kicks Snuka in the knee. Vito focuses all his attention on Snuka's knee. Snuka starts to make a comeback and knocks Vito down with a Dropkick. Snuka goes to the top turnbuckle to set up for the Splash but his knee gave out and he fell to the mat. Vito picks him up and hits the Code of Silence for the win.
Winner: Big Vito (13:16) |
Vito celebrates as we head to commercial.**Commercial Break**We return as Brian Christopher and Paul London make their entrances.Championship Hunt Qualifier Brian Christopher vs. Paul London Brian starts the match over-powering London to gain control. London manages to make a comeback and connects with a Dropsault. Christopher is dazed on the outside, leading to London hitting him with a dive over the ropes. As London gets in the ring, Christopher kicks him in the back. Christopher continues to control the match. Christopher picks London up for a Suplex but London counters into a Small Package for the win.
Winner: Paul London (12:31) |
London runs up the ramp and starts to celebrate.**Commercial Break**Penzer is backstage with Stevens and Gaspard. Penzer asks their thoughts on tonight’s main event. Stevens says that tonight he knows who he facing. He says that tonight he is prepared for the match. Gaspard says that tonight will be Afa and Fatu’s last night in the business after he’s done with them.
We go to the arena as Fatu and Afa make their entrance. During their entrance Stevens and Gaspard come from behind and attack them. The two teams brawl until Stevens and Fatu make it into the ring for the opening bell.Junior Fatu & Afa Jr. vs. Chase Stevens & Shad Gaspard Fatu and Stevens continue to brawl in the ring while Shad and Afa brawl on the outside. Stevens throws Fatu to the outside as he follows. Afa and Shad fight into the crowd. Stevens grabs a chair but Fatu kicks him before he can use it. Afa and Shad continue to brawl up the stairs of the arena. The bell rings and referee is talking with Penzer.
Winner: No Contest (Double DQ) |
Despite the bell ringing, both teams continue to brawl as we go to commercial**Commercial Break**We return and we see a video package hyping the Championship Hunt finals for next week as the show comes to a close.
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Post by Ramos on May 4, 2011 15:53:47 GMT -5
Not a huge fan of Big Vito so his win is a bit of a downer to start the show London vs. Christopher would be an awesome match in real life, however I feel the match could have done with a more detailed description considering it went for around 12 minutes. Glad London won though Stevens & Gaspard are a weird team although I suppose it's a good idea. Double DQ is a nice finish as it doesn't make either team look weak Overall your booking is good however I feel that you need to add a little more detail into the show but that's just my opinion. Hope you keep this up
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Post by jbarqu88 on May 4, 2011 16:01:14 GMT -5
Not a huge fan of Big Vito so his win is a bit of a downer to start the show London vs. Christopher would be an awesome match in real life, however I feel the match could have done with a more detailed description considering it went for around 12 minutes. Glad London won though Stevens & Gaspard are a weird team although I suppose it's a good idea. Double DQ is a nice finish as it doesn't make either team look weak Overall your booking is good however I feel that you need to add a little more detail into the show but that's just my opinion. Hope you keep this up Thanks for the feedback! The longer I have done the shows the more detailed they got, I feel.
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Post by Rule 30 on May 5, 2011 17:28:39 GMT -5
Glad to see you change the font color, but the layout could still use some work. Really don't like either man in the first match. And I think it went too long. Brian Christopher vs. Paul London would be a decent match. It should have main evented it though. With the tag match opening and that Vito/Snuka match stuck in the middle. Fun to see the teams brawl every where to what should have closed the show if you had it as the main event. Also, if you had cut down on Vito/Snuka you could have added another match with Kenny or Brown, two talented men. Okay show, but you still need some work.
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Post by jbarqu88 on May 6, 2011 1:21:16 GMT -5
Glad to see you change the font color, but the layout could still use some work. Really don't like either man in the first match. And I think it went too long. Brian Christopher vs. Paul London would be a decent match. It should have main evented it though. With the tag match opening and that Vito/Snuka match stuck in the middle. Fun to see the teams brawl every where to what should have closed the show if you had it as the main event. Also, if you had cut down on Vito/Snuka you could have added another match with Kenny or Brown, two talented men. Okay show, but you still need some work. Thanks for the reply. I'm still working on a few different layouts. Taking longer than I expected, though.
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Post by Bob Bob Bobelow on May 6, 2011 10:12:39 GMT -5
The first match shouldn’t have gone thirteen minutes. I don’t know anyone in this world that would’ve wanted to see those two guys compete that long on television. Vito winning is the right move, though. London over Christopher is the right move. Rather weak main event, I thought. Just not interesting all that much. The layout is pretty bland, and the details you give aren’t all that exciting. Hopefully you make the adjustments and this becomes better. Good luck.
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Post by jbarqu88 on May 6, 2011 11:42:03 GMT -5
The first match shouldn’t have gone thirteen minutes. I don’t know anyone in this world that would’ve wanted to see those two guys compete that long on television. Vito winning is the right move, though. London over Christopher is the right move. Rather weak main event, I thought. Just not interesting all that much. The layout is pretty bland, and the details you give aren’t all that exciting. Hopefully you make the adjustments and this becomes better. Good luck. Thanks for the helpful comments! I'm still trying to work on adding the right amount of detail to the matches. And like I said earlier, still working on a possible new layout.
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Post by jbarqu88 on May 7, 2011 11:36:47 GMT -5
The fourth edition of VCW drew in .4 million fans.
It appears as though, as of right now everyone on the roster is working without a contract. The company looks to be trying to sign everyone to two-year contracts.
While we do not have much information at the moment, it looks as though there are troubles brewing between VCW and Solofa Fatu Jr. (Junior Fatu). Apparently, Fatu is asking for too much money that the company is not willing to pay.
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Post by kurtangleisgod on May 8, 2011 3:35:41 GMT -5
Hey buddy, I appreciate the reply to Impact, sorry your reply is so late, but made sure I got it to you, you are one of two people bothering to reply to my diary, so I owe you. Again, apologies for the latesness.
Not a big vito fan, so kinda bummed he won, but a solid opener. London over Christopher was smart, much more excited and relevant performer. The main event was good, the brawl through the end was a good way to keep that simmering, and should be a good pay off when it is all said and done.
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Post by Hi, I'm John on May 8, 2011 11:09:44 GMT -5
Yeah, Not a fan of either Deuce or Vito so I really could care less about that match. Nice to see London winning, hopefully you keep pushing him. Shad and Afa starting a feud is pretty meh. Chase Stevens is above this imo. Decent show, you really need to start signing some Indy talent to hook me in as a reader.
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Post by jbarqu88 on May 9, 2011 9:30:08 GMT -5
Here is the list of confirmed matches for this week's VCW:
Shad Gaspard vs. Junior Fatu
Chase Stevens vs. Afa Jr.
VCW Championship Match William Gunn vs. Jesse James vs. Monty Brown vs. Paul London
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Post by jbarqu88 on May 10, 2011 11:37:44 GMT -5
The show opens recapping everything that happened at the end of last week’s show.
We then see Savage sitting in his office. He announces that tonight it will be a Triple Header Main Event. The first main event will be Chase Stevens versus Afa Jr. In the second main event it will be Shad Gaspard vs. Junior Fatu. And in the third, it will be William Gunn vs. Monty Brown vs. Jesse James vs. Paul London to determine the first VCW Champion.
We return to the arena as Shad and Fatu make their entrances. Shad Gaspard vs. Junior FatuShad starts the match off with a test of strength which he wins. Shad continues to over power Fatu, taking every advantage he can. Fatu starts to come back but Shad lays him out with a big boot. Fatu gets to his feet and tackles Shad to the outside. The two start to brawl and ref is up to a count of 8. Fatu hits Shad with a Super Kick and Fatu makes it into the ring at 9 and Shad gets counted out.Winner: Junior Fatu (12:08)Fatu celebrates but Shad rolls into the ring and lays Fatu out with a Clothesline. Shad taunts the crowd as the show heads to commercial. **Commercial Break**We return as Stevens and Afa make their entrances. Chase Stevens vs. Afa Jr.Stevens taunts Afa at the beginning of the match which Afa doesn’t take too kindly to. Afa starts the offense with several punches and kicks. Stevens backs into the turnbuckle and cowers between the ropes. The ref pulls Afa off of Stevens as Stevens pokes Afa in the eyes. Stevens keeps control until Afa hits him with a Samoan Drop. Afa begins to set Stevens up for something but Shad comes out onto the ramp. Afa starts yelling at Shad but Stevens gets him in a schoolboy for the win.Winner: Chase Stevens (14:25)Stevens begins to celebrate as we head to commercial. **Commercial Break**We see a video package recapping all of the Championship Hunt matches then the participants make their entrances. VCW Championship William Gunn vs. Monty Brown vs. Paul London vs. Jesse JamesThe match starts and Brown starts to fight with Gunn and London starts to fight with James. These four men have an all out war with one another until Gunn and London fight out onto the outside. Brown picks James up for the Alpha Bomb but James counters into a Schoolboy for a two count. All four men are fighting in the ring. Brown hits London with the Pounce and London falls to the outside. Gunn Clotheslines James to the outside and just as Gunn turns around Brown hit him with the Pounce. Brown pulls Gunn to the center of the ring and connects with the Alpha Bomb for the win. Winner: Monty Brown (18:36)Monty Brown celebrates with his newly won title as the show comes to a close.
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Post by legendkiller8 on May 10, 2011 16:04:08 GMT -5
-I owe you a reply like crazy, so here it is. -Fatu has been on a roll since the last time I viewed VCW. A decent win for him. -Chase Stevens over Afa Jr. was the best way to go in my opinion. -Great match here tonight. Monty Brown winning the gold is cool, hoping London wins it though. -Good show.
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Post by Ramos on May 11, 2011 9:39:36 GMT -5
Not really a huge fan of Junior Fatu so I believe Gaspard should have picked up the win here, Glad Stevens picked up the win over Afa Jr. Really enjoyed Brown picking up the win. Glad to see that everything is going into more detail now. Well done man
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Post by Hi, I'm John on May 11, 2011 14:26:31 GMT -5
Junior Fatu has kinda' ran his course in all past feds, so I don't enjoy him winning. Glad Shad got the last laugh though. Glad Chase Stevens went over Afa Jr. Never really saw anything good in Afa Jr. Glad Monty Brown won, I either wanted him or London to pick up the win. Hopefully they can feud over the belt. Decent show man, but you seriously need to sign some new talent.
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Post by Jord on May 11, 2011 17:04:49 GMT -5
Fatu going over Shad by count-out is leading me to believe that Shad will eventually go over Fatu cleanly - which would be the right call, in my opinion. Surprised to see Stevens get the win here but I'm glad he did because I'm not really a fan of Afa, Jr. He's quite boring. Monty Brown winning the title isn't really a surprise, to be honest. Most start-up feds on the board have Brown win the title and I kind of wish you went with someone else as the inaugural champion but out of the 4 men in the title match, Brown seemed most likely.
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Post by duan on May 12, 2011 14:33:40 GMT -5
A few things I am looking to comment on here. First off, I know you are a bit newer to sims, so you haven't hit a groove yet. Now, you made mention about how you were having format troubles, but the one you are using now is perfect to start off with. Makes it easy to read and follow. A few suggestions about the actual show include; Monty Brown leading the company doesn't make all that much sense to me, as I never saw him as a big name guy. Gunn or James would have sufficed in the being the first champion. Secondly, in order to get your show over more, I think you need more detailed segments outside of the ring. You actual match write-ups are solid, but the before and after effects are just lame if you ask me. But, keep this up, you will only get better man.
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Post by jbarqu88 on May 12, 2011 14:42:16 GMT -5
A few things I am looking to comment on here. First off, I know you are a bit newer to sims, so you haven't hit a groove yet. Now, you made mention about how you were having format troubles, but the one you are using now is perfect to start off with. Makes it easy to read and follow. A few suggestions about the actual show include; Monty Brown leading the company doesn't make all that much sense to me, as I never saw him as a big name guy. Gunn or James would have sufficed in the being the first champion. Secondly, in order to get your show over more, I think you need more detailed segments outside of the ring. You actual match write-ups are solid, but the before and after effects are just lame if you ask me. But, keep this up, you will only get better man. Thanks, man. It's greatly appreciated. The more I do it, the more detail the shows have, I feel.
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Post by Rule 30 on May 13, 2011 17:28:11 GMT -5
Alright. Decent layout here. I guess the opener was decent enough. Much better than your past openers. Fatu winning is okay with Shad getting the last laugh. Good win for Stevens. Best move their. Ugh, I'm really not a fan of Brown winning the title. I like him, but you would kinda need a bigger name like Jesse James or Billy Gunn to hold the title, and then have them drop it to Brown. Even though Brown was the second best choice. I just had two problems with this. First, the lack of promos/segments. You need to start building more interest into matches to make people want to read. The only feud going on right now is that random tag one, and wrestling thrives off of storylines and feuds. Which would actually my second one. lol. This could become a solid diary once you get the hang of things a little more. I'll give props to you though for doing something different and risky.
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Post by jbarqu88 on May 15, 2011 1:06:42 GMT -5
Once again, VCW drew in .4 million viewers.
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