WFW - Nitro! - Episode 2!

I just watched Episode #2 of WFW Nitro.



There have been some noticeable minor tweaks to the show which i liked, you've already mentioned that crowd printouts and backgrounds are going to be used in future episodes so i have removed this 'issue' from the dislikes. Overall there are more pros to cons in watching WFW so here is what i thought:



Likes:

• Arena and Entrance stage is excellent. Really looks great. I would suggest as the opening show image you do a close up of the stage and pan out to the crowd and then broadcast team as a show intro this would make it look great. Possibly add in the location of where your events are being held?
• Posing has improved, i liked particularly the Rock's opening hand before striking Daniel Bryan.
  
  
• Great Power bomb by Lesnar on D-Bry through the table.
  
  
• Great use of Eric Bischoff while Flair was absent.
  
  
• Good solid ending to the show a real swerve curve ball at the end with the Game being given his title and continuing his Championship Reign.
  
  

Dislikes:

This is more a spottable potential error in the scripting rather than an out and out dislike?

When D-Bry attacks Hulk Hogan, Jerry 'the king' lawler says

"It's a historical moment in 8years of WFW, and it's been ruined by Hogan" (I think this is meant to say Bryan because Bryan attacked Hogan? lol



Matches between
Edge vs CM Punk and
Big E vs ManKind
were too short IMO. Edge had maybe one or two shots before Punk hit GTS for a 3 count? I'm sure this would of made an upper mid-card event but Edge looked like he was jobbing?
Even worse for Mankind, got a build up only to be jobbing to Big E? I mean Mankind was known to take a tremendous amount of punishment in his day but here he looked like joe 'random' jobber off the street in a squash match?



Summary

Technically because the first dislike is more a proof read/error it's not so much a dislike, my only real issue would be those two matches were short and could of had more quality wrestling especially when referring to superstars Mankind + Edge! :-)



I really like what you've done in the two shows you've put out, i would suggest next time just proof reading your show before publishing.



My tip for show balance and flow is this: Grab a side of lined A4 at the top write down your match combatants. so for example.

Edge Vs RVD

Then in the side column write each number down the page 1-24 and do the same continuing on the other side until you reach about 38-40



In slot 1+2 have the intro for wrestler 1

In slot 3+4 have the intro for wrestler 2



Then have from 5 on wards the move sets for your match (write this in pencil first so that if you want to edit or change something you can erase it out).



Just like a short story your matches should have a beginning, a middle and an ending. Think about the move sets of the characters you're using in the ring, if need be re watch DVDs and practice those move sets in the ring with your figures. You're working with highly articulated figures and with practice and patience you'll get a better flow, variety of move sets and a much better product at the end.



If you would like, please message me when show #3 is out. I do like the direction your show is heading and it's 95% positive!



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P.S I'll send you an example via PM of the show structure i used in my fed, by all means copy the layout if you think it will help extend those future matches.

Hogan arrives! Great addition to the fed man.. Woah, didn't see that attack coming! Why Bryan why?! Great way to throw hogan into a feud..

Good opener between edge and punk, loved the kick that sent Edge crashing outside.. Bit of an awkward ending pose with the GTS and the ropes, but I see where you're going making punk cheat.

Haha! Here comes Van Dam and the missus! Oo damn, Mrs Rey Rey! Ha dude I'm loving where this is going!

A tad dissapointing how short E vs Mankind was, good to see the feud with Khali continue to build mind.

Lol, ahhh and they're blaming their wives for causing it in the first place. This is gold.

Again, I felt we didn't see enough of a match before the chaos ensued in the main event. Good way to introduce Triple H at the end, but I was confused as to wether Daniel Bryan is a face, heel or a bit of both? Rock/Brock are certianly heels so it was odd to me for Bryan to face them after such a heelish attack on Hogan. We'll see!

Another entertaining show man