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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2010 14:41:50 GMT -5
-Good opening promo. The Hardys on opposite sides of action sounds good for tonight.
-The No Contest was decent. McCool attacking them both and standing tall is interesting.
-Wade Barrett over JTG sounds good to benefit his new career on SmackDown. Hope it goes good for him.
-Matt Hardy and CM Punk make a great team if Hardy is heel. Glad they won since M.V.P won at Fatal Four Way on Punk.
-Ted over Drew is decent too. I also wouldn't mind seeing him take the IC Title Gold as I feel he has something to prove.
-Solid main event. Strong start to Kofi as WHC. I think it can be great if you make it.
-Good SmackDown.
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Post by ✖ AJ on Jul 11, 2010 15:59:27 GMT -5
- Good opening promo from The Hardy Brothers. Tag action shall be interesting.
- Like LayCool getting involved in that divas match is good, as it keeps them involved in the title scene.
- Big Show - angry. Challenging Edge to a match for next week is good, and I hope to see him continue his rage path.
- Barrett squashing JTG is fine, I suppose. Glad Barrett came out on his own as well, he can do good alone now.
- Matt and Punk picking up the win is good, and best that Punk pinned MVP and not either Hardy be pinned.
- Glad to see DiBiase picking up the win, puts him in higher contention for the IC Championship now.
- Lastly, great to see Kingston defeat Edge as it already puts him higher up. Jericho and Show involved after is good.
Good Smackdown as usual.
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Post by tnafanboy44 on Jul 11, 2010 16:29:08 GMT -5
- First off, happy McCool & Carlito and Ryder picked up wins.
- Fantastic promo from the Hardy's. Matt doing a great job getting over as a heel.
- I like the way you had the Divas go to a no contest. A great way to setup for The Bash.
- Love the way you're using Show. Just dominate as he should be. Hopefully he destroys Edge, next week.
- Barrett winning was good. Getting him over as a star.
- Actually surprised Hardy and Punk won, but it ain't a bad surprise. I feel like Matt could be used as the next major heel.
- Loving the Dibiase, McIntyre feud. Two great, young talents going head-to-head.
- Kofi winning wasn't a surprise. Hopefully, Jericho takes the belt away at The Bash. I just don't see Kofi as World Title material.
Overall, a pretty good show. Happy with most of the winners and Matt Hardy really shined, here.
I noticed a few misspelled words here and there, but no biggie.
Did you make the Bash poster and graphics?
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Post by DTP. on Jul 11, 2010 17:28:34 GMT -5
WWE SmackDown: Tuesday 9th July 2010...Quick fact regarding the dark match; usually these bouts never feature Local Competitors or jobbers when done as a dark match. Vance Archer making an on-screen push in the near future seems good, but yeah, usually these bouts only happen when an independent talent is given a tryout match. Zack Ryder and Carlito beating Goldust and Yoshi Tatsu is fine, pretty competitive tag bout here. Michelle McCool not on SmackDown seems a little odd, but respectable win against Tiffany. A good openign promo to start up with Matt Hardy in the ring, and honestly the heel turn of Matt Hardy against Jeff Hardy came unnoticed, because it was so inferiorly written and forgotten about because it occured so near the end of the show. In my mind, this would have been the best place for it to start. In a promo. Jeff Hardy's arrival was good, but you could make a lot of money off of building up Jeff and Matt so that they are never in the same ring, and that Jeff continuously tries to destroy Matt. Or visa versa. Beth Phoenix and Melina had a great opening contest as they usually do in fact. Good attack from Michelle McCool and Layla though. Perhaps a four-way bout may be coming up. Good win for Big Show against Luke Gallows in what would have been an interesting bout. I am intrigued by Show's involvement with the Straight Edge Society. Wade Barrett finally getting some air time to himself; good quick win for Barrett and really JTG has no more purpose, especially since Shad Gaspard went to RAW. Solid first-hour main event with Matt Hardy and CM Punk predictably winning against Jeff Hardy and MVP, liked how Punk pinned MVP too. Pull apart brawls are always fun. However, after an opening promo, on SmackDown when Theodore Long calls for a match, it usually opens the show if not main events. But yes, good worthy first-hour main event. Ted Dibiase beating Drew McIntyre was surprising and solid. Lastly, great encounter between Kofi Kingston and Edge. Enjoyable show overall, interested in where The Bash goes from here, but maybe you utilized focus on Jeff and Matt too much: it made Kofi as World Heavyweight Champion look mildly inferior.
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Post by Elliot on Jul 13, 2010 13:09:27 GMT -5
July 12th, 2010 - Lexington, Kentucky; Hart-broken
Ezekiel Jackson w/ William Regal def. Finlay
Jackson dominates the match and pins Finlay after the Book of Ezekiel.
John Morrison & Evan Bourne def. Shelton Benjamin & Shad Gaspard[/size][/color][/b] Bourne picks up the victory with the Shooting Star Press on Benjamin. "Yes, sir, we promised you a great Main Event..."- Before the show begins, we see a quick recap of the shocking events which took place here last week. We see the Masked Men throw Bret Hart in the trunk of a car and reverse at high speed into the side of another car, crushing Hart inside the trunk. The clip fades away on a shot of the crushed trunk as Raw opens up. Cue Opening Package- The pyrotechnics explode and the crowd pop as we are taken to Michael Cole and Jerry 'The King' Lawler. They look serious and Cole tells us that Bret Hart is in a critical condition and is currently still in hospital after last weeks attack. They say that Bret will not be returning to the WWE anytime soon until his condition stabalises. Cole reveals that tonight we will see the non-title Main Event of the WWE Champion, Sheamus versus John Cena, just six days away from Sheamus' WWE Championship match against Randy Orton at The Bash. And speaking of Randy Orton, they tell us that he will take on The Miz tonight while Batista will take on Bryan Danielson. We are also set to see The Hart Dynasty in Six-Person Tag Team Action against Dolph Ziggler, Cody Rhodes and Maryse. We are then cut off by Mr. McMahon's theme to a gigantic amount of heat. - Mr. McMahon comes out, entering the ring and grabs a microphone before speaking to the WWE Universe. He says "Last week, an unfortunate incident took place concerning Bret Hart. Now I understand that many are pinning the blame on me, however, I can safely say that I did not ask that the Masked Men do this to Bret, nor did I allow it to happen in any way. The Masked Men will suffer concequences, and those concequences is that I have personally banned them from the arena tonight. But, can't say I didn't enjoy watching them crush Bret Hart in the back of that car!" He gets a ton of heat for this. He then continues, saying "I can reveal that as a result of this incident, Bret Hart is unable to continue his duties as co-owner of the WWE, and I have been given full control over the company once again!" The crowd boo even more as McMahon grins from ear to ear. He then reveals that now that he is in full control of Raw, he can finally hire the General Manager he planned to hire a few weeks back. He says that the new General Manager of Raw will be revealed next week on Raw. McMahon then tells the WWE Universe to enjoy the rest of the show and leaves to a lot of heat as we fade to a promo package. - We see a promo package for The Bash, airing this Sunday! We then cut to a commercial break. Commercial Break- We return to see The Miz make his entrance to a lot of heat. He enters the ring and speaks to the WWE Universe. He says that the last couple of months have given him nothing but depression and disrespect. He vows that all that will change this Sunday when he beats Bryan Danielson to a pulp and makes sure the entire world knows that "I'm The Miz... and I'm... AWESOME!". He drops the microphone and Randy Orton makes his entrance, then the match begins. Randy Orton def. The Miz | A very good match actually. The Miz showed that despite his losses, he is still capable in the ring. However, Bryan Danielson once again made an appearence and cost The Miz the match. The Miz was looking to take the biggest victory of his career, but Danielson rushed to the ring and jumped onto the apron. The referee tried to get him down, but The Miz started shouting to him and was spun around into a huge RKO, giving Orton the victory. Orton celebrated as Danielson smirked. Orton motioned to the crowd that he would be WWE Champion this Sunday. We then fade backstage. |
- Josh Mathews is backstage with The Hart Dynasty to a pop, but they are looking extremely upset, obviously with good reason. Mathews says he doesn't want to bring up any sore subject, but asks them how they are feeling about what happened to Bret last week. Natalya speaks, saying that she is devastated by what happened and is disgusted that two men could actually do that to her Uncle Bret. Natalya begins to cry and is unable to speak, so David Hart Smith takes over. He says that they are going to destroy the Masked Men this Sunday for what they have done to the Hart Family. Tyson Kidd says that the Masked Men will pay, and that they'll wish they never messed with the Hart Family. They walk off, ready for their match as we cut to a commercial break. Commercial BreakDolph Ziggler, Cody Rhodes & Maryse w/ April Lee def. The Hart Dynasty via Disqualification | This match barely got started before it all broke down. The Hart Dynasty were looking to take out some anger and it all broke down when David Hart Smith smacked Cody Rhodes over the skull with a steel chair on the outside. Atfer the referee called for the bell, Tyson Kidd did the same to Dolph Ziggler, in the ring. Natalya threw Maryse out of the ring and into the front of the announce table. The Hart Dynasty then isolated Dolph Ziggler inside the ring and hit him with the Hart Attack. The Hart Dynasty look extremely serious as we fade to a promo package. |
- We see a the first of many WWE SummerSlam promos. This one show SmackDown superstars Hornswoggle been loaded into a cannon by Goldust, telling him it will be fine. He then lights the fuse and Hornswoggle is blasted into the sky and flies past an advertising banner that advertises WWE SummerSlam, airing on the 15th of August, 2010. We then return to Raw. - We are taken backstage to see Mr. McMahon in his office to a lot of heat. Even more heat arrives when Vickie and Chavo Guerrero walk in. Vickie is pretty much ass-kissing McMahon, telling him he looks sharply dressed as usual. McMahon thanks her, and as soon as she gets a smile from him, she asks him who he has in mind for General Manager of Raw. McMahon says that he has someone in mind, and they are currently on the Raw brand. Vickie smiles and shouts "Thankyou! Thankyou, Mr. McMahon!" She hugs him but McMahon just looks on in confusion. McMahon peels her off and tells her that she isn't the new General Manager. Vickie looks extremely embarrassed and runs off-screen to a chuckle from the crowd. Chavo apologises to Mr. McMahon and walks off as we fade to a commercial break. Commercial Break- We return to see a 'Don't Try This' package featuring Raw superstar, John Cena. We then return to Raw. Santino Marella def. Chavo Guerrero w/ Vickie Guerrero | A quick, yet very entertaining match. These two actually work so well in the ring. Chavo Guerrero is looking pretty good in this match and drops Santino for the Three Amigos. He then climbs up top for the Frog Splash, but Santino rolls away and Chavo misses. Santino then sets up 'The Cobra' and strikes Chavo in the face with it, causing him to turn around holding his eyes. Santino then rolls him up for the three count as Vickie screams in dismay. Santino celebrates his victory, patting his hand, still in the cobra position, as if to congratulate it. The crowd get a good laugh out of this one as we fade backstage. |
- Josh Mathews is backstage with John Cena to a huge pop. Mathews asks Cena what he thinks the action of the Masked Men last week, regarding Bret Hart. Cena says he was disgusted with their actions and he looks forward to The Hart Dynasty beating them down this Sunday. Mathews then asks Cena if he is ready for his match with Sheamus tonight. Cena says he is always ready to face Sheamus, and brings up the fact that Sheamus has never actually managed to beat him fairly. He says the first time, he fell through a table by accident, and the second time, Cena was taken out by the Masked Men. Cena says that once he has finished with McMahon and the Masked Men, he is coming for Sheamus and his WWE Championship. Cena walks off and we fade to ringside. Batista def. Bryan Danielson | A brilliant match with Danielson really getting his chance to shine. Mid-match, we have a Commercial Break. We return to see Batista on top, beating down on Danielson. Suddenly, Danielson fires back and takes the fight right to Batista. Suddenly, The Miz shows his face and distracts Danielson, which costs him the match as Batista spins him around and plants him with the Batista Bomb for the victory. Much like what Danielson did to Miz earlier, the event is reversed and both men got at each other just six days before their encounter. Batista celebrates his victory as we fade backstage. |
- We see the WWE Champion, Sheamus backstage, lacing up his boots for the Main Event later on. Suddenly, Mr. McMahon walks in to a lot of heat. Sheamus greets the Chairman with a smile and they shake hands. McMahon says that tonight, he wants Sheamus to make sure that Cena gets a beating. Sheamus says it's what he does best, and Cena will get the message tonight. McMahon pats him on the shoulder and he leaves as Sheamus smirks. We then fade to a promo package. - We see a promo package advertising this Friday's SmackDown to be Main Evented by Big Show versus Edge. It also hyped the return of the Highlight Reel with guest, World Heavyweight Champion, Kofi Kingston. We then cut to a commercial break. Commercial BreakNon-Title - Christian def. William Regal w/ Ezekiel Jackson | A simple match to build the feud between Christian and Ezekiel Jackson. From thematches these two had on ECW, it was bound to be good, and it was. Back and forth action with both men wanting to get the upper hand. At one point, it looked like Regal had the match as Ezekiel Jackson distracted Christian and Regal dropped Christian with a half-nelson suplex, but Christian kicked out. In the end, Christian hit the Killswitch for the victory. He celebrated but it was cut short by Jackson who entered the ring and clotheslined Christian to the canvas. Ezekiel Jackson then lifts Christian up and plants him back down with the Book of Ezekiel as both he and Regal stand tall. We then fade backstage. |
- We are shown R-Truth and Mark Henry backstage, talking about their recent teaming. Truth says he's glad he's found someone who he can be dominant with on Raw. Henry says that they should keep a look out tonight, because even though McMahon said the Masked Men are banned from the building, they could still show up. Truth says "Ain't that the truth... let's go!" Truth and Henry leave to keep watch as we fade to a promo package. - We see a promo package for The Bash, airing this Sunday. It highlights the WWE Championship match mostly. We then fade to a commercial break. Commercial Break- We return to hear Sheamus' theme. The WWE Champion comes out to a lot of heat, enters the ring and speaks to the WWE Universe. He says that last week, he was distracted by a video package on the titantron, clearly hinting at the return of Triple H. The crowd pop. Sheamus says "Hunter, you think you can play mind games with me through your little videos? Think again! I've put you out before, and if you come back, I'll just do it again! Tonight, I've got Cena to focus on, and when I;ve beaten him, I'll take out Randy Orton this Sunday at The Bash, and then, if you want, Hunter, feel free to put yourself next on the list, because I will take you out too!" He slams the microphone down and his theme plays again. We then fade to a promo package. - We see a promo package hyping tomorrow night's WWE NXT, advertising the Talk-the-Talk Challenge where each Rookie will be given a topic to talk about and they have 30 seconds to speak. The winner will receive a talkshow slot on the next episode. We then return to Raw. Non-Title - John Cena def. Sheamus via Disqualification | This was a great match, just like these two always have. John Cena was clearly angry at what happened to Bret Hart last week and the fact that mcmahon ahs told Sheamus to destroy him tonight. Cena is trying his best to keep Sheamus at bay, and it works for the most part. Sheamus gets an advantage mid-match and looks to put Cena away with the Crucifix Powerbomb, but Cena slips off and hits his signature shoulder blocks followed by the Five Knuckle Shuffle. Cena then measures Sheamus, ready for the Attitude Adjustment, but out of nowhere, the Masked Men jump into the ring and take Cena down with lead pipes. The crowd boo as the referee calls for the bell. |
- Sheamus quickly escapes, grabbing his WWE Championship, but out of nowhere, Randy Orton and The Hart Dynasty show up. Orton grabs Sheamus and smashes his head into the ring apron, while The Hart Dynasty enter the ring and battle with the Masked Men. Orton throws Sheamus into the ring and drops him with an RKO. The Hart Dynasty then throw the larger of the two Masked Men out of the ring and hit the smaller one with the Hart Attack. Randy Orton, The Hart Dynasty and John Cena stand tall as Sheamus and the Masked Men leave. There is a huge stare-off before The Bash this Sunday, but which superstars will come out on top? Monday Night Raw then fades to a close. © 2010 World Wrestling Entertainment, Inc.[/font][/center] |
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Post by Elliot on Jul 13, 2010 13:14:56 GMT -5
WWE.COM EXCLUSIVE
July 13th, 2010
- Earlier today, SmackDown General Manager, Theodore Long announced that this Sunday at The Bash, Intercontinental Champion, Drew McIntyre will defend his title against Ted DiBiase. This match has officially been added to this Sunday's Pay Per View.
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Post by Elliot on Jul 13, 2010 13:16:53 GMT -5
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Post by tnafanboy44 on Jul 13, 2010 14:06:08 GMT -5
- Good opening promo. Can't wait to find out who the GM is. HHH perhaps?
- Orton beating Miz was good. I think this match sets up for Miz, possibly being a top contender.
- I like the way the six-man tag went. Liking the seriousness of the Hart Dynasty, here.
- Santino winning was alright. I think this may be setting up for a Vickie/Chavo feud?
- Batista winning was good. I think this showed that Danielson can stand with the big dogs.
- Christian winning is great. I'm hoping for a Regal/Christian feud in the future.
- Not surprised about the outcome of the main event. Nice brawl to end the show. Trying to figure out who the masked men could possibly be.
Very good Raw, sets up the Bash quite nicely.
Also, happy McIntyre/Dibiase got added. Can't wait for that.
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Post by NOW that's WRESTLING on Jul 13, 2010 14:33:39 GMT -5
The Bash will probably be the best show ever. Just saying.
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Post by DTP. on Jul 13, 2010 18:20:45 GMT -5
WWE RAW: Monday 12th July 2010...Ezekiel Jackson beating Finlay is fine; would have been a fun match I suppose. John Morrison and Evan Bourne hopefully isn't a long term team. Good win against Shelton Benjamin and Shad Gaspard, but Benjamin and Gaspard have really had no luck since debuting on RAW as a tag team. They haven't even competed on RAW yet I don't believe. Good promo from Vince McMahon as he kicked off the show with a good promo. Pretty enjoyable and a nice setup for the General Manager announcement next week. Very strong opening contest that I anticipated would have been the first hour main event. Such a solid bout, good win for Orton but nothing taken from Miz as he will definitely have his hands full with Bryan Danielson at The Bash. Dolph Ziggler, Cody Rhodes and Maryse is an odd combination, but a nice win against the threesome of Tyson Kidd, David Hart Smith and Natalya of The Hart Dynasty. Really intrigued about who the Masked Men will be; the brawl in my mind was random, though. Amusing vignette for SummerSlam. Santino Marella beating Chavo Guerrero is fine, not really that good in my mind though and really just served as a filler. Vickie Guerrero involved in this situation is slightly baffling, like it's Extreme Rules 2009 all over again. Batista beating Bryan Danielson was just common knowledge, went slightly long though. Would have preferred this be the opening match and that Orton and Miz opened the second hour. I am so interested in whom Batista's masked accomplishes are. Christian beating William Regal is fine, technically these two have feuded for the last full year. Good win for John Cena against Sheamus in a good match wrecked by disqualification. A good show, the attack by the Masked Men once again likely. Preparing us for The Bash.
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Post by The Kevstaaa on Jul 14, 2010 18:00:07 GMT -5
-Good opening promo and I'm anxious to see who the new GM will be
-Orton over Miz is a good opener, expected Orton to win
-I like the touch you added by having Natalya cry, makes what happened to Bret seem more real
-Good six person tag, and having the Dynasty snap has me even more excited for the upcoming PPV
-The SummerSlam ad was golden
-The Vickie backstage stuff was funny, as was the Santino/Chavo match. Not sure what it did for the program though
-Figured Batista would beat Danielson, but just him giving "The Animal" competition was a big boost for his career
-Liked that you mentioned all of Christian & Regal's good ECW matches. Glad Christian won
-Like Truth & Henry trying to prevent the masked men from entering
Sheamus' pre-match promo was great and the main event was well done. Loved all of the post match stuff
Good edition of Raw, it sets up The Bash great. Adding the Intercontinental Title match is a big bonus for me.
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Post by ✖ AJ on Jul 15, 2010 16:32:15 GMT -5
- Nice heat given for Vince, and I am anticipating the new GM.
- Orton defeating Miz was quite obvious, even if Danielson didn't get involved.
- Hart Dynasty snapping on their opponents is interesting, adds a bit more character.
- Sad match between Santino and Chavo, but pleasing that Santino got the win.
- Once again, not surprising to see Batista win even if Miz didn't get involved, like Orton/Miz.
- Christian defeating William Regal is good, and Zeke standing tall after was good.
- Like the Masked Men getting into the arena somehow and making the match DQ, but the faces stand tall.
Good show overall.
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Post by legendkiller8 on Jul 15, 2010 21:41:53 GMT -5
-Good promo. Can't wait to see who the the GM will be.
-Orton over Miz was good. Wasn't expecting Danielson to interfere tonight.
-Good mixed 6 man tag. Ziggler, Rhodes, and Maryse over via DQ should make for some good contenders.
-Batista over Danielson was expected.
-Christian over Regal was good. I hope Christian makes a rush to the main event scene.
-Cena over Sheamus via DQ is good. Hoping that Cena makes some kind of involvement at The Bash since he isn't in a match.
-Good RAW.
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Jul 27, 2010 12:31:32 GMT -5
- Good opening promos. You're pretty good at promoting upcoming events.
- Um, Orton in the opening match? I don't follow this show by show so I'm not sure if he's supposed to be a lower card or if the match is just a rivalry that's lower on the card.
- Wow, the Hart Dynasty are pretty mad; for a good reason, too. I want to see them run over everyone.
- Santino V Chavo should've been switched with Orton v Miz, TBH. Good write-up, though. Very Realistic.
- Good segement. Once again, you're good with build up.
- Another flawless job with match write-up & build up. I'm interested in seeing Miz V Bryan.
- Interesting, I wanna see how you write up SD!
- After reading that I have my eye on The Bash. Flawless episode. It really deserves the spotlight. I couldn't imagine how much effort this has put into it.
My one complaint is that you almost have too much detail. There's 17 promos in one show & each are pretty detailed & it may get somewhat boring when you read about 3 paragraph sized promos before a match.
I'm not trying top be rude just giving some constructive critisism. Even the best diaries have room to improve.
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Post by totti on Jul 27, 2010 14:14:54 GMT -5
its not that detailed..
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Post by shiftyeyes on Jul 27, 2010 14:20:04 GMT -5
- Good opening promos. You're pretty good at promoting upcoming events. - Um, Orton in the opening match? I don't follow this show by show so I'm not sure if he's supposed to be a lower card or if the match is just a rivalry that's lower on the card. - Wow, the Hart Dynasty are pretty mad; for a good reason, too. I want to see them run over everyone. - Santino V Chavo should've been switched with Orton v Miz, TBH. Good write-up, though. Very Realistic. - Good segement. Once again, you're good with build up. - Another flawless job with match write-up & build up. I'm interested in seeing Miz V Bryan. - Interesting, I wanna see how you write up SD! - After reading that I have my eye on The Bash. Flawless episode. It really deserves the spotlight. I couldn't imagine how much effort this has put into it. My one complaint is that you almost have too much detail. There's 17 promos in one show & each are pretty detailed & it may get somewhat boring when you read about 3 paragraph sized promos before a match. I'm not trying top be rude just giving some constructive critisism. Even the best diaries have room to improve. No offense, but you completely contradict yourself. You said that its flawless, but go on to point out what you see as a flaw? As well, its hard to condense promos, since they aren't like matches where you can say 'A defeats B via Suplex at 12:20.' As you have to outline what was said or done. |
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Post by DTP. on Jul 27, 2010 17:14:11 GMT -5
I know there's reply for reply, but this takes the piss. You're reviewing a guy's reply? Because that isn't sad or anything.
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Post by legendkiller8 on Jul 27, 2010 22:52:06 GMT -5
Is this diary still even going? Hope it does. This is a great diary.
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Post by Elliot on Sept 11, 2010 8:13:26 GMT -5
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Post by ✖ AJ on Sept 11, 2010 11:39:12 GMT -5
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