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Post by Dex on Aug 3, 2016 18:02:32 GMT -5
No worries man. Life should always come first and you should feel accomplished that you've tried hard to get your priorities straight. That's more than most can say.
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 3, 2016 18:27:30 GMT -5
All my priorities right now include eating as much cheap sh*t mall Chinese food as I can until my Max Pack comes in and DDP tells me I can't anymore.
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Post by dachs on Aug 3, 2016 21:41:35 GMT -5
So, over these past couple days, if all but decided I was gonna scrap Brennan (again) and throw in the towel on this whole angle I've been writing. I've over convoluted it to the point I almost felt I couldn't back out of it, and I'd gone as far as PMing Drakz and Rated R and tried pawning off my Superbrawl spot so I could make a quiet exit. bad guy™ will gladly tell you that I can sometimes be the most abrasive person here, and he isn't altogether wrong. Sometimes, the most abrasive of us need a little taste of our own medicine to get the right kick in the ass we need, and that's where I've been lately. I've had a twice sick kid, I'm fighting with my oldest and best friend, I've quit my number one vice (soda, not booze, you Neanderthals) and my mental state has been at a point where the last thing I gave a f*ck about was some boozehound's journey towards ambiguity. That said - I got the best advice I've ever gotten in 15+ years of rp'ing. Drakz could have just as soon accepted my bow out and told me to do me, but instead, he gave me the best possible direction ever: "Don't be a bitch" I've written some right drizzling sh*ts lately, but almost immediately after conceding that I wouldn't, I mapped out an rp that should effectively right the ship, so to speak, and I'm really excited to get going on it. Long story short - we've got a real motivator on our hands, and you guys are stuck with me for a bit longer. Onward to SB. i tried
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Post by bad guy™ on Aug 3, 2016 21:53:10 GMT -5
I'm selfishly glad Bren is hanging around.
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 3, 2016 22:02:09 GMT -5
I'm selfishly glad Bren is hanging around. It does work rather well in your favor, doesn't it? I was never gonna leave, truth be told. Anyone who knows how I roll knows that I've got something like seventeen character concepts ready to go at any given time. Mike might be the only cat around here who could hold a candle to the number of personalities one of my old shrinks thought I was developing by doing this. Down the line, I've got one in particular that I want to do a run with at some point but I think for the time being I'm stuck with the alchy. There's something to be said for my most successful character (in spite of my whopping ZERO title runs) (f*ck you I'm in the hall of fame) (by default, I know) out of, christ, five in the WFWF alone? I'm an arrogant sob, and I don't like having off days cause I'm pretty proud of my writing but if I can make it to Superbrawl I'm practically gonna have a clean slate anyway so might as well, right? I really need to stop this "never gonna write another match" and then writing abother match sh*t though.
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Post by Drakz on Aug 4, 2016 3:57:25 GMT -5
So, over these past couple days, if all but decided I was gonna scrap Brennan (again) and throw in the towel on this whole angle I've been writing. I've over convoluted it to the point I almost felt I couldn't back out of it, and I'd gone as far as PMing Drakz and Rated R and tried pawning off my Superbrawl spot so I could make a quiet exit. bad guy™ will gladly tell you that I can sometimes be the most abrasive person here, and he isn't altogether wrong. Sometimes, the most abrasive of us need a little taste of our own medicine to get the right kick in the ass we need, and that's where I've been lately. I've had a twice sick kid, I'm fighting with my oldest and best friend, I've quit my number one vice (soda, not booze, you Neanderthals) and my mental state has been at a point where the last thing I gave a f*ck about was some boozehound's journey towards ambiguity. That said - I got the best advice I've ever gotten in 15+ years of rp'ing. Drakz could have just as soon accepted my bow out and told me to do me, but instead, he gave me the best possible direction ever: "Don't be a bitch" I've written some right drizzling sh*ts lately, but almost immediately after conceding that I wouldn't, I mapped out an rp that should effectively right the ship, so to speak, and I'm really excited to get going on it. Long story short - we've got a real motivator on our hands, and you guys are stuck with me for a bit longer. Onward to SB. Maybe I should go into motivational speaking?
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 4, 2016 13:04:06 GMT -5
Also, I forgot my customary boasting: it ain't my sh*t holding up the results anymore.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2016 14:21:07 GMT -5
Question for all the WFWF people: I've been doing a lot of thinking, and I'm concerned that I'm taking Makoto a bit too seriously as I write him. I mean he's not a comedy character but he's also not supposed to be edgy and intense either, I think. Am I off base about that observation? I'm also wondering if writing him more light hearted or just writing a more light hearted character would be easier for me to develop.
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Post by Drakz on Aug 4, 2016 16:40:17 GMT -5
It's entirely your decision man. I for one think a mix of both is key to success here. For instance Drakz always makes me laugh at least and yet he's a pretty intense guy at times as well. Who else talks to a dog that talks back and routinely beats the ever living sh*t out of people?
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Post by bad guy™ on Aug 4, 2016 17:12:12 GMT -5
So, over these past couple days, if all but decided I was gonna scrap Brennan (again) and throw in the towel on this whole angle I've been writing. I've over convoluted it to the point I almost felt I couldn't back out of it, and I'd gone as far as PMing Drakz and Rated R and tried pawning off my Superbrawl spot so I could make a quiet exit. bad guy™ will gladly tell you that I can sometimes be the most abrasive person here, and he isn't altogether wrong. Sometimes, the most abrasive of us need a little taste of our own medicine to get the right kick in the ass we need, and that's where I've been lately. I've had a twice sick kid, I'm fighting with my oldest and best friend, I've quit my number one vice (soda, not booze, you Neanderthals) and my mental state has been at a point where the last thing I gave a f*ck about was some boozehound's journey towards ambiguity. That said - I got the best advice I've ever gotten in 15+ years of rp'ing. Drakz could have just as soon accepted my bow out and told me to do me, but instead, he gave me the best possible direction ever: "Don't be a bitch" I've written some right drizzling sh*ts lately, but almost immediately after conceding that I wouldn't, I mapped out an rp that should effectively right the ship, so to speak, and I'm really excited to get going on it. Long story short - we've got a real motivator on our hands, and you guys are stuck with me for a bit longer. Onward to SB. Maybe I should go into motivational speaking? Isaac Cray's "Don't Be a Bitch" Tour 2k16.
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Post by King Richius on Aug 4, 2016 17:28:12 GMT -5
I hope a few more people than just JDFranchise and Drakz read and review the RPs for this show. Its hard to tell if you're going in the right or wrong direction when 90% of the members don't say anything at all
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Post by Mr. PerpetuaLynch Motion on Aug 4, 2016 17:54:07 GMT -5
Question for all the WFWF people: I've been doing a lot of thinking, and I'm concerned that I'm taking Makoto a bit too seriously as I write him. I mean he's not a comedy character but he's also not supposed to be edgy and intense either, I think. Am I off base about that observation? I'm also wondering if writing him more light hearted or just writing a more light hearted character would be easier for me to develop. Yeah as Drakz said I found the best bet is a healthy mix of both. Like for Lucas Crowe he's kind of a no nonsense, badass beast of a man and there isn't much room for humour from him but I still write stuff involving him or his surrounding cast that makes me chuckle. Sometimes more light heated characters have an incredibly short lifespan. Justin Tyme for a good chunk of his career was a lighthearted character and because of it I've had extended periods where I've run out of things for him to say or situations for him to get into. It Doesn't so much matter if the people reading it find it funny, a lot of times you should be writing to impress yourself first and foremost. Don't go out of your way to do funny because there's a good chance of it falling flat but if you can work something into your writing that amuses or impresses you then there is a good chance that it will amuse or impress someone else.
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Post by BIG MCLARGEHUGE on Aug 4, 2016 20:20:34 GMT -5
Question for all the WFWF people: I've been doing a lot of thinking, and I'm concerned that I'm taking Makoto a bit too seriously as I write him. I mean he's not a comedy character but he's also not supposed to be edgy and intense either, I think. Am I off base about that observation? I'm also wondering if writing him more light hearted or just writing a more light hearted character would be easier for me to develop. Yeah as Drakz said I found the best bet is a healthy mix of both. Like for Lucas Crowe he's kind of a no nonsense, badass beast of a man and there isn't much room for humour from him but I still write stuff involving him or his surrounding cast that makes me chuckle. Sometimes more light heated characters have an incredibly short lifespan. Justin Tyme for a good chunk of his career was a lighthearted character and because of it I've had extended periods where I've run out of things for him to say or situations for him to get into. It Doesn't so much matter if the people reading it find it funny, a lot of times you should be writing to impress yourself first and foremost. Don't go out of your way to do funny because there's a good chance of it falling flat but if you can work something into your writing that amuses or impresses you then there is a good chance that it will amuse or impress someone else. Depends, I prefer the Kevin Nash route and that's only to amuse myself and if that makes others laugh - cool.
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 4, 2016 20:29:06 GMT -5
I hope a few more people than just JDFranchise and Drakz read and review the RPs for this show. Its hard to tell if you're going in the right or wrong direction when 90% of the members don't say anything at all Not to put on my abrasive hat too much, but... Welcome to WFWF. For a long time I prided myself on being one of the three or four guys that R&R'd to every rp for every show, but on that end of the spectrum, it's equally frustrating when you knock out 14 critiques for 14 different rps at the length that you brought to mine this week (which is usually my style), to get maybe 2 or 3 in return for your troubles. There's a whole mess of be the change you wish to see comments that a whole mess of people could lob at this problem, but the long and short of it is that the critical side of e-fedding is one of the major, major shortcomings around here. I chalk it up to the fact that largely this group skews in the early to mid 20s and upward, and that's an age range that's trying to make time for a f*ck ton of everything else on top of saving a little space for this little hobby we all cling to. If you consider the length some writers go to here, multiply that by at least 8 to 10 per show, that's a lot of reading to try and squeeze in between 40 hours on the job (to say nothing of the additional ten hours I spend behind the wheel in traffic each week), a wife, a kid, shrink appointments, yard work, summer outings, and all the other happy horsesh*t that comes with being just me, and that's not even going into the guys here that are pursuing degrees and all that sh*t. Man, I haven't even read a book since my kid's been born, and reading is one of my favorite things to do. It'd be cool to see it change. I'll certainly try if I find the time next show, but I think that overall it's just a big textbook example of "it is what it is".
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 4, 2016 20:33:37 GMT -5
Question for all the WFWF people: I've been doing a lot of thinking, and I'm concerned that I'm taking Makoto a bit too seriously as I write him. I mean he's not a comedy character but he's also not supposed to be edgy and intense either, I think. Am I off base about that observation? I'm also wondering if writing him more light hearted or just writing a more light hearted character would be easier for me to develop. There's no wrong answer here. Write the character you want to write. I try to look at this place from the same perspective I would if I were on staff with a major promotion. Variety is the spice of life. 80% of the characters here are probably some variety of brooding, deep, angsty because it's easy to write because flaws come packed with layers upon layers to work with, but making a humorous character work on paper takes a bit more focus (it's also why this place is so damn heel heavy). I say f*ck what anyone else wants you to write, and just put the words down that convey what you're trying to say.
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Post by King Richius on Aug 4, 2016 20:41:50 GMT -5
I hope a few more people than just JDFranchise and Drakz read and review the RPs for this show. Its hard to tell if you're going in the right or wrong direction when 90% of the members don't say anything at all Not to put on my abrasive hat too much, but... Welcome to WFWF. For a long time I prided myself on being one of the three or four guys that R&R'd to every rp for every show, but on that end of the spectrum, it's equally frustrating when you knock out 14 critiques for 14 different rps at the length that you brought to mine this week (which is usually my style), to get maybe 2 or 3 in return for your troubles. There's a whole mess of be the change you wish to see comments that a whole mess of people could lob at this problem, but the long and short of it is that the critical side of e-fedding is one of the major, major shortcomings around here. I chalk it up to the fact that largely this group skews in the early to mid 20s and upward, and that's an age range that's trying to make time for a f*ck ton of everything else on top of saving a little space for this little hobby we all cling to. If you consider the length some writers go to here, multiply that by at least 8 to 10 per show, that's a lot of reading to try and squeeze in between 40 hours on the job (to say nothing of the additional ten hours I spend behind the wheel in traffic each week), a wife, a kid, shrink appointments, yard work, summer outings, and all the other happy horsesh*t that comes with being just me, and that's not even going into the guys here that are pursuing degrees and all that sh*t. Man, I haven't even read a book since my kid's been born, and reading is one of my favorite things to do. It'd be cool to see it change. I'll certainly try if I find the time next show, but I think that overall it's just a big textbook example of "it is what it is". Yeah, I am feeling a little of that as I have tried to read and reply to every RP in an attempt fully participate here and even if it's not my RP there is something to be gained from reading every reply which is why I'd like to see more. I figured a little nudge here or there couldn't hurt. I do have a time advantage over most people in that I am stuck at home on permanent disability so I am basically a retired person who feels sick every day. That means plenty of time to read and reply.
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 4, 2016 21:30:02 GMT -5
What concerns me more than anything about the lack of responses week in and week out isn't the fact that people aren't receiving a wide range of feedback to build off of, but rather the fact that, more than likely, people aren't reading each other's stuff, period.
Now, I'm a big advocate for bucking conventions and rules, especially when it comes to artistic and creative ventures. I failed and quit a music theory class when I was 16 because the idea that music could have rules offended me, but as a life long writer and reader, I do believe, in my heart of hearts, that outside of any grammatical or spelling conventions, there is one cardinal, unbreakable foundation that applies to any and all who aspire to become any sort of writer.
You. Cannot. Write. If. You. Do. Not. Read.
Everything you f*cking read will inspire you as a writer, whether positively or negatively, and it will shape everything you write going forward whether you recognize it or not.
I'm 31 years old. My favorite book of all time is a book I read in my 7th grade English class. Every last bit of writing I've ever done since reading that book in one sitting has carried some bit of it with it. Conversely - Stephen King cannot end a story to save his f*cking life. He can weave and weave and weave til he's got blankets for days but at the end of it all he's always going to have frayed edges because he can't wrap that sh*t up. Now, I'm a long winded, slow cooking son of a b*tch, but I always try and be conscious of the end game because I f*cking never want to write a Stephen King ending as long as I live.
But seriously - we have a wide range of writing skills here. Guys like myself, Drakz, Josh, etc. collectively have years of this under our belts in excess of 20 years. Alone, I've been doing it on and off for 15, and I've been writing my whole life. Conversely, we have guys who have never put a creative thought on paper before. I cannot stress enough - if you do not read you are never going to get better at this.
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Aug 4, 2016 22:13:09 GMT -5
I've read all of them, but as a total newb, i have 0 feedback i can really offer...
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Post by Prophet of Ash on Aug 4, 2016 22:17:39 GMT -5
my final run, though fizzled ending, had an ending before the first match with Drakz. From the start it was meant to be a final ride and a total self destruction. Not sure what this applies, but it's my once a week post around here, so enjoy it
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Post by Drakz on Aug 5, 2016 4:37:44 GMT -5
What concerns me more than anything about the lack of responses week in and week out isn't the fact that people aren't receiving a wide range of feedback to build off of, but rather the fact that, more than likely, people aren't reading each other's stuff, period. Now, I'm a big advocate for bucking conventions and rules, especially when it comes to artistic and creative ventures. I failed and quit a music theory class when I was 16 because the idea that music could have rules offended me, but as a life long writer and reader, I do believe, in my heart of hearts, that outside of any grammatical or spelling conventions, there is one cardinal, unbreakable foundation that applies to any and all who aspire to become any sort of writer. You. Cannot. Write. If. You. Do. Not. Read. Everything you f*cking read will inspire you as a writer, whether positively or negatively, and it will shape everything you write going forward whether you recognize it or not. I'm 31 years old. My favorite book of all time is a book I read in my 7th grade English class. Every last bit of writing I've ever done since reading that book in one sitting has carried some bit of it with it. Conversely - Stephen King cannot end a story to save his f*cking life. He can weave and weave and weave til he's got blankets for days but at the end of it all he's always going to have frayed edges because he can't wrap that sh*t up. Now, I'm a long winded, slow cooking son of a b*tch, but I always try and be conscious of the end game because I f*cking never want to write a Stephen King ending as long as I live. But seriously - we have a wide range of writing skills here. Guys like myself, Drakz, Josh, etc. collectively have years of this under our belts in excess of 20 years. Alone, I've been doing it on and off for 15, and I've been writing my whole life. Conversely, we have guys who have never put a creative thought on paper before. I cannot stress enough - if you do not read you are never going to get better at this. This! While many of the newer or less experienced guys may be intimidated when it comes to replying to RPs because they feel they have nothing to add, a simple "I liked this bit" or "I didn't like this bit" goes a long way. Support is as valuable as critique around here as I feel if you've only just started, or equally you've been doing it for years and have just churned out what you consider a masterpiece, it's nice just to know that people are reading your work. Back to what Deep Figure Value said though. For me the most important part of reading other's RPs is to improve yourself. Not only that but it gives you a whole heap of material to play off of if you ever wind up having a match against that person. As the owners me and Trace read and reply to every RP (sometimes only one of us if the other is too busy with life) and I log so many little bits of information so that when it comes down to you facing Drakz he's got so many ways to verbally tear you down, because he(I) knows everything there is to know about your character. Ya dig?
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