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Post by The Future on Aug 5, 2016 15:18:13 GMT -5
I hope a few more people than just JDFranchise and Drakz read and review the RPs for this show. Its hard to tell if you're going in the right or wrong direction when 90% of the members don't say anything at all  I've had a review in mind for yours for the past few days, dude, just crazy busy monday-friday. Tomorrow I'm gonna have up about 5-6 responses, because it's my free day. I feel that feel, though, man. Always makes it feel worth it when you receive constructive criticism. It's on its way! |
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Aug 5, 2016 16:59:24 GMT -5
I replied to all, i think, tried to give some sort of feedback
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Post by King Richius on Aug 5, 2016 18:22:10 GMT -5
I hope a few more people than just JDFranchise and Drakz read and review the RPs for this show. Its hard to tell if you're going in the right or wrong direction when 90% of the members don't say anything at all I've had a review in mind for yours for the past few days, dude, just crazy busy monday-friday. Tomorrow I'm gonna have up about 5-6 responses, because it's my free day. I feel that feel, though, man. Always makes it feel worth it when you receive constructive criticism. It's on its way! Well, I was actually asking on behalf of all the newer members whose introductory pieces weren't getting a lot of replies but yeah, given the big event and direction switch I took this time around I look forward to your comments. Please be sure to read my last reply in the thread first as I hope it adds some clarity to why everybody dies. |
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Post by King Richius on Aug 5, 2016 18:26:45 GMT -5
While many of the newer or less experienced guys may be intimidated when it comes to replying to RPs because they feel they have nothing to add, a simple "I liked this bit" or "I didn't like this bit" goes a long way. Support is as valuable as critique around here as I feel if you've only just started, or equally you've been doing it for years and have just churned out what you consider a masterpiece, it's nice just to know that people are reading your work I love this. If in doubt as to how to comment on an rp, a simple technique is to type "I liked this because..." or "I didn't like this because..." and then fill in the blank with the one thing that stood out the most to you. |
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BIG MCLARGEHUGE
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TURN YOUR DREAMS INTO NIGHTMARE!!!!
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Post by BIG MCLARGEHUGE on Aug 5, 2016 22:35:16 GMT -5
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Post by King Richius on Aug 5, 2016 22:46:48 GMT -5
I can't read. Staying in character until the end...I like it. You should do all your posts on WFigs as Big McLargehuge. I'd love to read the reactions from those who don't visit the WFWF forum. |
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Post by BIG MCLARGEHUGE on Aug 5, 2016 22:56:16 GMT -5
I can't read. Staying in character until the end...I like it. You should do all your posts on WFigs as Big McLargehuge. I'd love to read the reactions from those who don't visit the WFWF forum. I would if I didn't already see how low the tolerance is for troll posts. They get locked too quickly sometimes.. the girl advice ones are the only ones I've seen that at least got some good play. My muse for Big has strangely become ... like serious. I seriously thought I'd run through my dumb jokes and make in jokes that like two people would get but now that I've thought about it, Big is actually going to have a story. Nothing too serious but yeah. |
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Post by dachs on Aug 11, 2016 17:03:41 GMT -5
dachslemania running wild. wew
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 11, 2016 18:09:41 GMT -5
dachslemania running wild. wew Well, I mean, something's got to, this place dead as it is, right? |
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Post by dachs on Aug 11, 2016 18:46:30 GMT -5
dachslemania running wild. wew Well, I mean, something's got to, this place dead as it is, right? dachs' back is buckling under the weight of this company. |
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 11, 2016 20:53:45 GMT -5
I like to think that I'm on the cusp of some great turning point with David Brennan, but the real evolutionary character arc is the guy typing this here message. Those of you who remember my Jack 'n Coke Zero escapades as recent as earlier this year might be crumb bummed to know that once I got my kid down for the night I sat up drinking Polar Seltzer and watching Cheers in my underwear.
The times, they are a-changin', kids.
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Post by bad guy™ on Aug 11, 2016 21:09:22 GMT -5
I like to think that I'm on the cusp of some great turning point with David Brennan, but the real evolutionary character arc is the guy typing this here message. Those of you who remember my Jack 'n Coke Zero escapades as recent as earlier this year might be crumb bummed to know that once I got my kid down for the night I sat up drinking Polar Seltzer and watching Cheers in my underwear. The times, they are a-changin', kids. Thanks for the visual, Bob Dylan. |
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 11, 2016 21:21:36 GMT -5
I like to think that I'm on the cusp of some great turning point with David Brennan, but the real evolutionary character arc is the guy typing this here message. Those of you who remember my Jack 'n Coke Zero escapades as recent as earlier this year might be crumb bummed to know that once I got my kid down for the night I sat up drinking Polar Seltzer and watching Cheers in my underwear. The times, they are a-changin', kids. Thanks for the visual, Bob Dylan. I wouldn't be any sort of dad if I didn't do embarrassing dad things, now would I? Lemme tell you something though? Polar Seltzers? That's a miracle drug right there. I've kicked most of my boozing to the curb and I'm two months removed from drinking 5-6 sodas a day cause of that stuff man. I'm totally buying a Crystal Pepsi the minute I see it though. |
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Post by bad guy™ on Aug 11, 2016 21:22:39 GMT -5
Thanks for the visual, Bob Dylan. I wouldn't be any sort of dad if I didn't do embarrassing dad things, now would I? Lemme tell you something though? Polar Seltzers? That's a miracle drug right there. I've kicked most of my boozing to the curb and I'm two months removed from drinking 5-6 sodas a day cause of that stuff man. I'm totally buying a Crystal Pepsi the minute I see it though. I dig seltzers. |
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 11, 2016 21:24:42 GMT -5
I wouldn't be any sort of dad if I didn't do embarrassing dad things, now would I? Lemme tell you something though? Polar Seltzers? That's a miracle drug right there. I've kicked most of my boozing to the curb and I'm two months removed from drinking 5-6 sodas a day cause of that stuff man. I'm totally buying a Crystal Pepsi the minute I see it though. I dig seltzers. It took a while for me to come around to them, but it was a necessity if I was gonna ever kick soda. I just like fizzy drinks man. |
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Post by bad guy™ on Aug 11, 2016 21:27:35 GMT -5
It took a while for me to come around to them, but it was a necessity if I was gonna ever kick soda. I just like fizzy drinks man. Bought myself a sodastream a while back, best investment. I don't even use the flavorings. Just straight fizzy water. |
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Post by Dex on Aug 11, 2016 21:35:12 GMT -5
Not too big a fan of fizzy drinks, I think it's because I have sensitive teeth.
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 11, 2016 21:39:34 GMT -5
Not too big a fan of fizzy drinks, I think it's because I have sensitive teeth. That ain't the fizzies, it's the sugar. Source: I have rotten teeth. |
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Post by Dex on Aug 11, 2016 21:41:20 GMT -5
Not too big a fan of fizzy drinks, I think it's because I have sensitive teeth. That ain't the fizzies, it's the sugar. Source: I have rotten teeth. Ah. Either way, whenever I drink a soda I feel like my teeth are dissolving. |
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Aug 11, 2016 21:45:31 GMT -5
That ain't the fizzies, it's the sugar. Source: I have rotten teeth. Ah. Either way, whenever I drink a soda I feel like my teeth are dissolving. That's not just intuition - they are. I'm not even a health nut - I've been craving a Dr. Pepper for two straight months but sometimes you gotta do what's gonna keep you walking the earth a bit longer. |
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I dont know good luck 
