Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 22, 2019 12:24:13 GMT -5
It'll still weight 6lbs and 2oz. It's exactly 3" long but like 10" round. Oh my xDDDDDDDDDDDDD I know what you're thinking, you want The Yardstick(TM) to meet up with Mesh when she gets feeling better. Right? But he's The Yardstick(TM) and you just don't measure up!(quote is in fact trademarked as well) |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 22, 2019 12:20:19 GMT -5
Can't anymore. Claimed. Standard shotgun rules. He's also gonna carry a scale to weigh his penis after he measures it. It alone weighs 6lbs and 2oz. Nahh. Make it really small but give it lots of girth. It'll still weight 6lbs and 2oz. It's exactly 3" long but like 10" round. |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 22, 2019 12:18:01 GMT -5
Fun fact: before I decided on using Mesh as my main character, I had an idea for a new character known as "The Yardstick" where his gimmick was that he was the yardstick to success. My pic base was going to be Benjy Bronk with a ruler after he measured the size of his penis. Can't anymore. Claimed. Standard shotgun rules. He's also gonna carry a scale to weigh his penis after he measures it. It alone weighs 6lbs and 2oz. |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 21, 2019 14:18:31 GMT -5
A new guy going by the name of "Big Splash" is debuting at SoTF, and he will infact make a big splash.
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 21, 2019 14:00:05 GMT -5
I tried to recruit like crazy through out SB season, I don't even know if my group of people I asked even showed up, but I'd like to think it was from the efforts of people like myself that was recruiting. However, yeah it's wild.
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 21, 2019 13:48:41 GMT -5
Go ahead and sign Jayson back up.
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 18, 2019 17:15:09 GMT -5
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 18, 2019 16:55:25 GMT -5
Frank Lynn will not be wrestling but I will submit a segment. Do I even have to respond? Even if its a formality, yes please. Okay. To quote bad guy™ You know my angle. Go ahead and sign me up for Hell too. |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 18, 2019 16:48:39 GMT -5
Do I even have to respond?
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 15, 2019 19:06:29 GMT -5
Your match writing is fine, Mesh just had a...flow to work with. Only thing I'll bitch at you about is learn to write  ing commentary. That's even more arduous a task than match writing itself. DK gave me pointers on the commentary for Broom/Needles but I wrote the commentary myself. Some of which I added on my own. Blame me for the subpar commentary. No. He knew I didn't write it. He means I don't know how to write commentary period (I really suck) and I need to learn. Wasn't knocking the commentary in the show by no means. |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 15, 2019 18:04:37 GMT -5
Let me state for public record: I wrote the match out, BUT it was Mesh that made it work so much better and edited and added and fixed parts to make the story and the match flow more seamlessly. I'll do my three questions after work. Glad the show was well received. Learned I need to get better at match writing. Your match writing is fine, Mesh just had a...flow to work with. Only thing I'll bitch at you about is learn to write ing commentary. That's even more arduous a task than match writing itself. Yes sir! You got it! |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 15, 2019 17:08:47 GMT -5
Favorite match would be Broom and Needles, mainly because while I knew the outcome that was the one match (other than my own) I hadn't seen any of, and DK did a fine job with it. My favorite moment would be the destruction of Mesh by Needles. Kid's going places, just needs the right guidance RP wise and theicwguy will be right up there. Biggest surprise would be Drakz at the very end, "the constant" talk. I wasn't quite sure what either of them had planned, if anything, for post match if they won. So even if Drakz only said like, five words...the fact the man could speak after the hell us writers put them both through let alone be that prickish is surprising even for Drakz. Let me state for public record: I wrote the match out, BUT it was Mesh that made it work so much better and edited and added and fixed parts to make the story and the match flow more seamlessly. I'll do my three questions after work. Glad the show was well received. Learned I need to get better at match writing. |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 15, 2019 10:44:32 GMT -5
I'm proud of what everyone did. Skipping my match, Needles and Broom was great, far better than I had originally. Hopefully as time goes on and I read shows again I'll get used to the characters so I can help out more effectively.
Mesh and Ahriman, Jesus Christ. Like how now there are two barbed wire crowns in WFWF. Neat. Besides that, what a match. I thought for a long bit of it Mesh was turning heel on us, until of course the end and the whole Daniel Knight thing. Thank god you can take a break.
The triple threat ladder match was amazing. I loved seeing the ending. I was told the ending was something crazy, and by damn it was. Frank has redemption, finally. Now, what's the plan? It's a lot easier chasing something. Now what?
The main event is just.. it speaks for itself. I can't say anything about it to help anyone visualize what happens. Read it. It's a fantastic match, and I'm glad I didn't judge the winner. It was hard between the two.
Congratulations to everyone apart of it, welcome to the WFWF all the new cats with your promos, and we promise Stay Gold will be posted before Halloween.
Happy SuperBrawl Day everyone!
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 13, 2019 0:09:20 GMT -5
What if we just play "My heart will go on" and hug? Is that your scene? Nope. More of a keg party until someone jumps off the roof into the pool while screaming "I am the lizard king!" Can I be the guy that disappears for hours on end then you find me because you're scared I'm dead and I'm knocked out in the yard? |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 13, 2019 0:02:38 GMT -5
Oh f*ck, are we gonna' have a group hug and kumbaya drum circle after the show is posted? That's not my scene, ya dig? What if we just play "My heart will go on" and hug? Is that your scene? |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 10, 2019 19:22:28 GMT -5
Aren't you supposed to be on a creative break? I didn't mean, like....right now. I mean later. Ah. Good. Don't kill yourself writing and writing and writing. |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 10, 2019 19:17:26 GMT -5
Up to them if they wanna give it to Mesh and Rich though. I'd be okay with having some of the history here. I have tons of flash drives that are empty and in my downtime, I could go through everything and post the definitive history of the WFWF as best as I could. That should be an interesting assignment xD Aren't you supposed to be on a creative break? |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 9, 2019 15:34:18 GMT -5
Oh god, flashbacks to training. Thanks for all the kind words. Yeah, dialogue isn't my strongest of suites, and I'm glad it came off as I intended it too. I realize now that part was clunky and definitely needed some descriptions at the least. On the topic of dialogue though, is the dialogue itself good? Like does it flow well in your eyes? Back when DK was a regular for the first time, my dialogue was pure garbage. I hope this piece was better. For the most part I thought the dialogue was okay. I just think that some of the larger blocks would have benefited from being broken up into smaller chunks. It worked when the son fired off a series of questions like a typical overly excited kid and when DK replied in a similar rapid fire fashion with his answers. In other cases, it didn't work like the example I quoted in my earlier post. Honestly, dialogue has always been my achilles heel and something I've worked hard to keep improving on. I'm just passing on advice that has been given to me that i'm still trying to master. I appreciate it. I'm glad the actual words in the dialogue came off decently enough. I'll work on it next RP. Thanks Rich! |
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Devilkiller
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 9, 2019 15:03:47 GMT -5
Random thought: I get an bit of hipster vibe from DK so I would have him vape instead of smoke. That's just my take of course but I toss it out there for your consideration. Oh god, flashbacks to training. Thanks for all the kind words. Yeah, dialogue isn't my strongest of suites, and I'm glad it came off as I intended it too. I realize now that part was clunky and definitely needed some descriptions at the least. On the topic of dialogue though, is the dialogue itself good? Like does it flow well in your eyes? Back when DK was a regular for the first time, my dialogue was pure garbage. I hope this piece was better. |
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Post by Devilkiller on Jun 7, 2019 13:34:52 GMT -5
Hospitals are the worst. One night in the infirmary when my gall bladder went on the fritz was enough to drive me mad. Seven nights when my son was born actually damaged several recesses of my mind beyond repair. If I ever had/have to go 35, I don't think I'll ever live to tell the tale. Can't lie, there were a few nights in the second week after the surgery when no progress was being made where I was ready to give up. Just open up the morphine drip and take it all in one giant shot. One nurse in particular, Natalia, pulled me through, took the time to actually talk to me, took me on walks OUTSIDE so I could get fresh air and be reminded of what I was fighting for, and provided the best care I could ask for. She would even check in on me when I wasn't one of her assigned patients during a shift. She wasn't on duty yesterday when I was discharged so for the first time ever, I wrote a thank you note for one my caregivers during my stay. I'm glad you pulled through, and glad you had someone that actually would take care of you. Hope the recovery goes speedy and all the way to 100%. |
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