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Post by Revvie® on Nov 30, 2010 13:08:33 GMT -5
I would be up for a hand and i might discuss it with you....but horror i think is still mad at me for our disagreement so he has yet to give me the thumbs up
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 30, 2010 1:21:04 GMT -5
Well I am hoping to re-open the Developement Center but give it a new direction BUT it will actually be helpful and quite different and a lot of fun, I think so atleast. I got a thumbs up from EBR and am pending Horrors response...
for the new guys, this will help you alot.
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 29, 2010 15:53:45 GMT -5
I did a bit more of an artistic writing approach...which i know is mostly frowned upon in modern day lit and what not. But win or lose, extension or not. I hope for those of you who enjoy writing, I hope you will enjoy this.
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 29, 2010 15:51:43 GMT -5
Looking Through The Mirror Arc I: Act IVVerse I: A StartA book laid upon a desk, its cover; without description. Its ideas, its thoughts, its life is without truth but not without meaning. A book laid upon a desk, its cover; without description. Its mind absent of forethought but its soul was filled with hindsight. A man sat at the desk, his eyes, a void. His ideas, his thoughts, his life without meaning but not without truth. A man sat at the desk, his eyes, a void. His mind, absent of nothing, his soul , absent of nothing, his truth; absolute. So we find a man, at a desk. Upon the desk a book rests. A book rests and waits for its time. Its time to be read. Its time to be understood. Its time to be as absolute as the man. One must first open a book to see the pages; pieces of an unborn soul. One must first open a book to see the page; pieces of an unborn man. Reverend sat at a desk. Upon the desk a book rests. Verse II: A TruthA past riddled with pain and redemption. A past plagued with death and rebirth. A Holocaust for one measly soul. A Holocaust for one measly title. A Holocaust for a beginning. A present riddled with incompetence and ignorance. A present plagued with fools and thieves. An Awakening for one measly soul. An Awakening for one measly title. An Awakening for a new day. A future riddled with glory and fire. A future plagued with insight and recognition. Resolve for one measly soul. Resolve for one measly title. Resolve for a day never to come again. Verse III: A Hope“-But every man is more that just himself; he also represents the unique, the very special and always significant and remarkable point at which the world’s phenomena intersect, only once in this way and never again. That is why every man’s story is important, eternal, sacred; that is why every man, as long as he lives and fulfills the will nature, is wondrous, and worthy of every consideration. In each individual the spirit has become flesh, in each man the creation suffers, within each one a redeemer is nailed to the cross…” Demian By Herman Hesse Verse IV: A SermonIt is truly amusing that as long as I have been around in this business that I find the same scum still sticking to the underbelly of this federation. This match means about as much to me as the last and the next. A loss is a loss and a win may very well be a win but in the world that I dwell, neither matters. Shawn does not matter, Trace does not matter, only my truth matters and that is one that lies. My partner too will find his accompaniment to the ring to be as futile as those that stand across from us. Its not a matter of apathy my dear children, no it’s a matter of personal pride. Am I to waste another breathe or another idea on simpletons when there truly are those out there that I know to be true and worthy. Maybe had I stood across from my partner, one might have seen a match worth its weight in gold and bounty but sadly this is not the case. A failed idea is still a failed a idea and a wrestler without talent or resolve is still just that. Malakai is just that. But please, let me not be bigot. I myself am no saint and I have seen my share of the naïve and I worked hard on my ideas. I have worked hard on my methods and I am absolute. This idea that some day you will be a big star, maybe get your name in the Hall of Fame or even just your name in gold across the bottom of that WFWF title. No, that’s for those who better their methods, for those who see what I have seen. For those like Wayne Mcgurk, who, like myself, has pushed and pulled and grasped onto each rock and climbed the mountain of men both old and new to claim his truth. When you look into my eyes again Trace, when you look into my eyes Malakai, know the one thing that neither of you posses, I resonate. I know what it takes to be on top and choose to lay low and save my strength. I have no quarrel with either of you and nor would it be brave nor courageous to make an enemy out of me or men and women of my kind….. …oh yea, Amen. “Amen.” God
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 28, 2010 23:11:24 GMT -5
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 28, 2010 22:48:12 GMT -5
Im not going to argue anymore...im not going to rp but I wont argue my case because this is an efed, not a trial. I just kindly asked for a simple extension and honestly I gave more then my fair share of extensions when I was owner and a time or two...well i wont name the people i have given a bit more time too.
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 28, 2010 22:28:27 GMT -5
Hey. Braden showed. Besides, it falls on both of you. From what I heard, there was a serious lack of communication from both ends. Maybe if you both had tried a little harder, or if you had signed into messanger or whatever, this wouldn't have had to happen. Also, you saw the drama last week. No way in hell was anyone getting an extension this week after that. Not you, not me, not E/D/Albright...no one. Well consider Rev retired again...Sorry to Brad, sorry to Alex, big sorry to E...but if this place is going to be ran like a prison then i dont find itfun...there are other efeds
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 28, 2010 22:17:21 GMT -5
ps: hopeyou enjoy your win
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 28, 2010 22:16:36 GMT -5
I'm gonna make Horror decide whether or not there's an extension because of the sh*t he gave me two weeks ago about it. FLIP MODE How dare you pass the buck back to me after I passed it to you? Jerk. No extensions. Sorry. its cool i just wont other then to rp...im not rushing and since my original intention to do a joint rp was squandered time wise and when i did get ahold of him i ask for an extension....im debating if im even going to stay...i frickin busted my ass for this fed and for you horror and one extension is to much for someone who ussually rps and early at that rate... ie...go to hell...Horror ![8-)](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/cool.gif)
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 28, 2010 9:40:18 GMT -5
I need to get an extension....Prolly just til sometime tomorrow....B-rad doesnt know how to work on a joint rp until the lst minute so we have nothing put together yet and i work all day today and im off tomorrow.
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 22, 2010 16:39:12 GMT -5
i honestly do not care about my RP's anymore. you give me all this advice, i try hard, and still no "good job" or "good RP" i dont give a s**t if my RP mentions my match or noot. just ![](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/wfcensored.gif) ing tell me that i ![](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/wfcensored.gif) ing suck at this s**t and get it over with. it'll save you so much time and yes i do realize that my RP's aren't good. they never will be good. cause you never tell me im improving. stop telling me that i have bad grammar, cause my grammar will never ![](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/wfcensored.gif) ing improve either. i'll become the worst RPer in WF history and be damn proud of it. AHAHAHAHAH...oh sorry ![::)](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/rolleyes.gif)
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 22, 2010 16:08:31 GMT -5
im thinking about officially giving up on RPing. you guys give me all this advice and yet when i use it, its still not good enough for you guys. so whats the point of trying to impress you guys? ![:-/](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/undecided.gif) wait, wait, so people give you some crap.....and you run away? Roleplaying is something you have to get good at, its not something that your instantly going to amazing...your not going to impress me for a long time but if your taking strides in your work then thats all that matters.... Do you think I walk in and was awesome. Not at all, it took years to get good. actually ive been rping 5 years and it took 3 good years in the middle there to give me what I needed to write a good rp. Dont get me wrong, if you cant handle some rough love critism then you may want to take a look at what were talking about. A fun past time where you should be more worried about being a better writer, not a better rper....rping comes with time. ![::)](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/rolleyes.gif) otherwise you can whine and depart....but nobody likes a Calvin so yea
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 21, 2010 22:28:39 GMT -5
Really, you ahve to have a tag team seperate from a stable where both of you are members? ![:-X](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/lipsrsealed.gif) Well, we might as well not call ourselves the Horsemen cause 2 of the 4 are gone. And plus Horsemen is abit unoriginal. Boulder came up with the name. Not me. So is your new "original" team biblically based then? ![::)](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/rolleyes.gif)
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 21, 2010 22:22:57 GMT -5
Officaly made a team page for me and Albright. Meet 50% of Heaven and HellReally, you ahve to have a tag team seperate from a stable where both of you are members? ![:-X](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/lipsrsealed.gif)
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 18, 2010 15:05:33 GMT -5
Brad hit me with your messengers. I would prefer some sort of joint rp...just wouldnt feel like a tag match if we didnt.
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 17, 2010 15:28:20 GMT -5
Thunder could give me the mod spot...i wouldnt run ne thingi could just moderate since ive been quite active lately?
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 17, 2010 15:12:41 GMT -5
Lets all Welcome the George W. Bush of the WFWF.... ![::)](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/rolleyes.gif) I'm sad just a little...................... you should be.... ![::)](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/rolleyes.gif)
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 17, 2010 6:49:41 GMT -5
We been over what you need to work on...which EBR also covered so you should be ok right at the moment...but good job! haha
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 17, 2010 6:48:23 GMT -5
Pretty good stuff....Nothing overwhelmingly spectacular but solid work...I enjoyed it so thats all that really matters to me.
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 17, 2010 6:46:12 GMT -5
I liked this. I find in promos most people don't tie random opening monologues into the overall point of the RP as well as this, and in doing so you already smoothly established a character and his motivations. Kudos. Im to lazy to write my own comment when point have been covered...so im stealing EBR's until royalties have been paid sorry...haha ![::)](http://www.wrestlingfigs.com/images/rolleyes.gif)
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